Starry Sky Monarch

Already invested and recommended, the writing is pretty good, but the plot is a bit bland at the moment. This golden finger is more acceptable. You don't need any system plug-ins. The genius stream of warriors is more promising. The plot must be well conceived, logical, lively and interesting, have a beginning and a tail, not too brainless, have fun, and have climaxes. The content of the story must be tense. Come on, write the plot well, there is a lot to do! (You can read more works by great masters in this genre and absorb them. Although I think those books are just like that, if they are popular, you can still learn from them)

A few suggestions. Personally, I feel that it's too tight now. Don't write about your origins. Don't write about so many alien races coming early. You can write about them. The main thing is that the second generation is really not good. Even if you write about them, you can only write about one or two.