My Farm Game Comes to Life

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Can the plot development be smoother? Originally, the protagonist was about to take off, but suddenly there were bumps. At first, his father was deceived into being hospitalized and he was very persuaded to quit. Now, chores are coming one after another. The protagonist has no awareness of precautions, and the system does not support the certificate application. The construction team even returned the goods. This novel is like a good story and a real village. It is like the big potholes on the highway. I want to speed up but can't.

The debt at the beginning is considered a classic start, and the worldliness is a bit troublesome, but the rest is fine and reasonable. The system is not all-inclusive and ignores logic, so I can continue to read it.

The main theme of farm farming articles is pastoral and comfortable. Most of the people who click on it don't want to read the kind of story that is full of bitterness, hatred, intrigues, and ups and downs. Even if there is, it is for a quick transition, so it is up to the writer to decide what to write and what not to write.

Goldfinger is blind, he does all the trivial things, he has a weak character

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

The beginning was a bit too bitter and full of hatred.

Sigh~ The author has a lot of common sense questions! Not much else to say, come on!

Don't write something that's too awesome. If it's too awesome, it won't be interesting.

It is a relatively good farm farming story. Although it has a game system, it is not just a game of life, and the system capabilities have also been rationalized to a certain extent. It is not like ordinary farm systems that are similar to stand-alone games.

🎭 Character design: It's okay. There are no surprises in the character design of ordinary web articles. 🎬 Plot: Not bad, the creativity is excellent, the author has comprehensive information or has a rich knowledge reserve ✒️Writing style: average, average writing style for online articles, average writing style leads to a mediocre sense of substitution. In total, it can reach the grain and grass level.

Did the author want to write about the good intentions and bad intentions in the village? I don't want to read these hurdles in my writing, because the protagonist, plug-ins, and connections don't have 50% of the ability to cover up. For example, many novels start with debts, maybe because they spent a huge amount of money to buy the mountain for 70 years. This kind of thing is a kind of cover-up. When the protagonist encounters When a problem arises, readers will expect that after the problem is solved, this hilltop will become more sculpted and attractive... As for the author, some malice breaks through the bottom line. For example, you said that someone might interfere in the town, that the village does not belong to you, etc. It is easy to worry about it. I wonder if you would write this kind of plot when your brain is hot. I mean you are the author, not the protagonist When you feel insecure when reading a book, you will ask for a more stimulating storyline, such as the reactions of NPCs and supporting characters. If the previous ones are low (similar reactions), it will not be good. Next, when reading, it is easier to worry about the details I just mentioned There is no excitement, and there is no details. I am interested but I will save it. It is difficult to follow up and I am afraid of eating shit Come on (big thunder saves your life, don't scold me, I can hit people)

Stay tuned, author, I've been following up on updates, come on!

Then I'll give you another one 🙂

Your father is almost dying, but you still can't bear to feed him some good fruits. There are awesome fruits in your system mall, why don't you pick up a few so that your parents can get well and go home soon. So is this brainless protagonist...

Books with too few reviews are not interesting to read.

It's rare to encounter this kind of writing nowadays. It's close to life and the characters are quite vivid. I look forward to continued updates.

The plot design is a bit deliberate. Although there are more places to write about various conflicts, the plot still feels a bit unnatural. It is readable, but not good.

Not interesting. Clichés have been written about it, but the quantity is not enough.

Generally speaking, if you want to do everything yourself, why not hire a few more people? Waiters and delivery people all want to do it yourself.

I haven't seen this kind of systematic farm article for at least three years.