My Farm Game Becomes Reality

Can the plot development be smoother? Originally, the protagonist was about to take off, but suddenly there were bumps. At first, his father was deceived into being hospitalized and he was very persuaded to quit. Now, chores are coming one after another. The protagonist has no awareness of precautions, and the system does not support the certificate application. The construction team even returned the goods. This novel is like a good story and a real village. It is like the big potholes on the highway. I want to speed up but can't.

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The debt at the beginning is considered a classic start, and the worldliness is a bit troublesome, but the rest is fine and reasonable. The system is not all-inclusive and ignores logic, so I can continue to read it.

The main theme of farm farming articles is pastoral and comfortable. Most of the people who click on it don't want to read the kind of story that is full of bitterness, hatred, intrigues, and ups and downs. Even if there is, it is for a quick transition, so it is up to the writer to decide what to write and what not to write.

Your father is almost dying, but you still can't bear to feed him some good fruits. There are awesome fruits in your system mall, why don't you pick up a few so that your parents can get well and go home soon. So is this brainless protagonist...

Goldfinger is blind, he does all the trivial things, he has a weak character

Don't write something that's too awesome. If it's too awesome, it won't be interesting.

Sigh~ The author has a lot of common sense questions! Not much else to say, come on!

🎭 Character design: It's okay. There are no surprises in the character design of ordinary web articles. 🎬 Plot: Not bad, the creativity is excellent, the author has comprehensive information or has a rich knowledge reserve ✒️Writing style: average, average writing style for online articles, average writing style leads to a mediocre sense of substitution. In total, it can reach the grain and grass level.

It is a relatively good farm farming story. Although it has a game system, it is not just a game of life, and the system capabilities have also been rationalized to a certain extent. It is not like ordinary farm systems that are similar to stand-alone games.