Douluo: Taotie Swallows the Sky

I suggest you read the original work a few more times. The setting of the original work is not clear, and the plot is designed to involve the left and right brains competing against each other. Two Wuhun Palace titled Douluo who were not even level 96 dared to come and assassinate Ning Fengzhi openly. The protagonist and Ning Rongrong were so frightened that they ran directly to the Holy Soul Village. This is even more speechless. If you don't go to Tiandou City to find Tang San, what's the point? There is really no rationality at all.

To be honest, the writing is okay, but I just like to watch the torture of Tang San, and the first few chapters are a bit mindless. The martial arts point is full of the robbery and killing of Ning Fengzhi.

There's nothing wrong with it, the writing is acceptable. It's not particularly amazing, but it makes people watch it. Not to mention the new barrage streams and voice streams, which are the same as 💩. Most of the rest are from the studio. The early setting is okay. After more than ten chapters, the plot is watered down. The protagonist and the villain are like mentally retarded.

Level 30 at 9 years old, level 48 at 15 years old, with devouring ability Level 17 in six years, less than level 3 in one year on average. People who don't know better thought you were the ultimate martial spirit, but you turned out to be a waste of leveling up Author, you can't write without leveling up, then you should just stop writing so exaggeratedly earlier, and you end up like this 😅😅😅

The main character's name is so tacky, and the name Xuanzi itself is very classy. You're going to make me laugh out loud when you call me the tacky Xuan Tianji.

Qian Xunji, I have given this a lot, regardless of the environment of Douluo Continent; in the context of Douluo, Qianxunji is not only a rapist but also an incest, and the old era background would have been cut to pieces by a thousand cuts. Sendoriyu, known as the one with the most chivalry, is actually the same as the Third Hokage in being extremely cowardly and indecisive, and he also found out that his son had committed incest and rape without any punishment; it is the same as those weird songs on the Internet. Qian Renxue, in order to win over Tang San, sold out her people with just one sentence. She was a classic example of a superior person. In short, these three people are really no match for angels in a broad sense. They are really just angels doing their best. ---- However, the One Thousand Dao and Ten Thousand Spirit Hall as a whole is much better than the others. As for what Tang San did after that, it is indeed not as good as these three people. If these three people have problems with their private ethics, then Tang San simply lacks public ethics. Just because the evil spirit masters are flying all over the sky and the soldiers don't know about martial arts, we can see how different Tang San is.

The writing is too sparse and there is almost no characterization. The only advantage is not the studio and AI writing. I hope the author will continue to improve.

I originally wanted to watch it, but the protagonist you wrote joined the Qibao Glazed Sect, so I didn't want to watch it. I still like to watch the kind where the protagonist is unfettered and carefree. This kind of thing is not suitable for me.

I don't know if it's the author's poor writing style or something else. Some of the words used are a bit strange, and there are some comparisons, which are very confusing. (I listen to books, I don't know if reading them will be better)

Come on, this is the second Douluo fanfic I have read, Wuhun Taotie Shenniu. I personally like the setting of this Wuhun. I hope the word count is longer and it can be completed smoothly.

It's well written, it must be a single female protagonist, otherwise the book will be completely useless.

Taotie? Sacred cow? Dragon bloodline? What the hell, the protagonist cheated?

No conspiracy theory? Then Tang San didn't just go to the roadside? As long as you have the skills for the Asura God and Poseidon, as long as you are better than Tang San in all aspects. The sea god Shura, who was eager to get rich, arranged the protagonist properly.

To be honest, it's still a bit of a wash of Tang San, and the later part is also a bit of a nanny. The protagonist is more abstract and not like a normal person.

Not bad, seeing that the latest chapter has a trend of accepting Tang San as his younger brother, it's not unreasonable

How many heroines does the author have?

Step three? Stepping on Wuhun Palace? Relaxing alone? Douluo fight for hegemony?

There are not many fans from the Qibao camp these days, and most of them are from the Wuhundian camp. I hope the author will write well, and I hope this novel can become the second Lingzhu Divine Sword.

Come on, you are very helpful, much better than those in those studios

I'm a little confused. Your only high-quality book is Dou Po, so why don't you continue writing about Dou Po instead of writing about Dou Luo? Or is Dou Luo doing well in QQ?

It's well written, but not enough to read.

Dear author, when will you update? (Douluo Peerless Dark Night God King Extra). Please 😭😭😭 please update it.

His Majesty is now writing a book. Why do I feel that it is not as good as before? It turned out that I have followed both of them, especially the second one. There is no replacement. I will go.

So is Zhu Zhuqing going to give it to Dai Mubai?