The Price of My Super Power Romantic Comedy Is Social Death

The author must keep writing. It's been a long time since I've had such a good light novel. It's not cliché at all, it's completely my own style 😆😆😆

I read twenty-nine chapters in one breath. The author is very good at describing the emotions and interactions of the characters. At the same time, compared to traditional Niku, I think the description of the inner emotions of the protagonist is too in-depth. The first few pictures at the beginning are too everyday and it is not easy to grasp the readers immediately (personal opinion). The parts about superpowers and punishment after use are not prominent enough (only at the beginning), that is, there is no strong sense of conflict, but this does not mean that there will be no strong conflict later. Good intention, on the contrary, I think every incident caused by the use of punishment is very interesting and has a sense of connection that will not make the previous and subsequent stories too abrupt. However, going back to the beginning, the author's inner description of the protagonist is too in-depth, especially the emotional description of his own past experiences. I think this emphasis is against the purpose of romance novels, and should be more focused on the inner emotional description between the protagonist and other female characters. However, my personal understanding is that the author wants to complete the personal emotional growth and breakthrough of the protagonist first, and then use a more sound and complete soul to complete the emotional collision and connection with other characters. The problem is that the rhythm of the story may be slow, but this does not prevent me from feeling that the overall character is very three-dimensional. The characters currently shipped also have their own characteristics, so Overall, the level of this work is above average, and the current results are indeed not enough to match it.