The Pinnacle of Being a Pirate Begins with Cheating Fate!

I can't see the benevolence and righteousness of the protagonist at all. He is a complete egoist. It is difficult to like this kind of character. The story line is also very confusing. A second-rate novel is not worth reading.

When I read Chapter 45, I didn't know what the next ten chapters were about. It was a bit baffling. New names kept appearing, and these people seemed to have nothing to do with the protagonist, and they didn't seem to be a complete plot.

After reading the introduction, I personally feel that it is not good to join the Knights of God. Although every time Im appears in the comics, it seems like he has lost his memory. My personal guess is that there are different souls in Im's body. Go to the navy to develop, it's actually okay.

Is it easier to get into MarieJoia or is it easier to get into MarieJoia? Didn't Teacher Huang teach you? (Knock on the blackboard)

I don't see what I want to write. I don't focus on the protagonist's role. I've been writing about other supporting roles.

It feels like the author just wrote whatever he was dreaming about, and the plot is here and there with a hammer and a stick, and he has no idea what he is doing.

🙂 The protagonist's natural fruit ability is no longer enough. He is replaced by Nika's black dragon aunt Tian Ket Meow and now the water gods are here.

What on earth are you going to write? What is the protagonist going to do?

Why do you keep talking about fate? I don't like it very much. A magic stick has traveled through time. How can he still believe in fate?

The protagonist is really the "Madonna" 😰. The village chief and the villagers said that the protagonist and who is the son are indifferent to each other, and they pretend to be stunned that they are not tripped. They have nothing to say.

How can I put it this way? The first part is pretty good, but at the end emmm I don't really catch a cold. There's no big battle. The writing is a bit too small and doesn't suit John well.

There is nothing heroic about what I wrote before.

Didn't the introduction clearly state that it was the Thunder Fruit? They all come to fight against the Thunder Fruit, which is quite awesome. Why don't you ask the author to write a fruit of God? According to your thinking, if you don't have fruit, you can't be on the stage if you are awesome. Why don't you go to the original work and attack the original author? He, Roger the Pirate King, is a piece of shit. There is no phantom beast fruit, so why write One Piece? . . . To be honest, you guys are quite funny. . . Let me ask you whether you come to see the story or to see God.

Why not use the whole fantasy beast thunder god fruit?

Why did you change your profile again? Has your main plot changed again? Did you just write it without an outline?

First of all, it is true that electricity generates magnetism, and then electromagnetic force is force. Therefore, the magnetic fruit itself is the original force of electromagnetic force. Isn't it stronger and more convenient to use? Electromagnetic force is present everywhere in the universe, and it dominates most phenomena from micro to macro. The main aspects are as follows: 1. Light and all electromagnetic waves: visible light, radio waves, X-rays, etc. Are essentially vibrations of electromagnetic waves. They are produced by the acceleration of charged particles and are the medium through which electromagnetic forces propagate. They are also the main source of information for our observations of the universe. 2. Magnetic fields and activities of celestial bodies: The Earth's magnetic field protects the atmosphere from being stripped away by the solar wind; Jupiter has extremely strong radiation belts; sunspots, flares, and synchrotron radiation emitted by nebulae are all caused by the movement of charged particles in the magnetic field. The regular radio signals of pulsars also originate from their strong magnetic fields. 3. The form and process of matter: atoms and molecules are combined by electromagnetic force. Therefore, stars, planets, interstellar dust, as well as the light emitted by stars, thermal radiation inside planets, nebula luminescence and other phenomena are essentially governed by electromagnetic force. 4. "Non-gravitational" phenomena in the universe: Although gravity dominates the orbits of celestial bodies, electromagnetic force plays a significant role in the movement of high-speed charged particles. For example, high-energy radiation in supernova remnants, X-ray emission from black hole accretion disks, deflection of cosmic rays in magnetic fields, etc. To put it simply: gravity is responsible for the "skeleton" of celestial bodies, while electromagnetic force determines the "flesh" and brilliance of the universe. Almost all the information in the universe that we can "see" or "detect" is produced by electromagnetic force.

So far, before it was released, the story line was confusing, the protagonist's actions as a big pirate were not domineering enough, and there was nothing exciting about it, and there were too many supporting characters that didn't make sense. Hay

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So far, overall it's pretty good

Why does the protagonist on this cover look so naive?😏

If you are not as talented as Luffy, why don't you give it to Luffy? Anyway, Luffy has almost completed the game and liberated the world after two and a half years since he went to sea. If the protagonist is not as good as Luffy, how can he make up for the regrets in the fandom world?

Literary youth, the main line is not clear, etc. There are not many chapters now, so it should not be a big problem. Collect first and then talk. Come on, author💪

Cause and effect, time and space, aren't they strong? We have to get one, the basic fruit Gold, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, rain, thunder and lightning, these are the basic elements of the world And the fruit of cause and effect, exported to become true, time, space fruit, innately invincible You play with me, thunder and lightning