
There's a Bad Cultivator from the Magic World.
魔法界来了个臭修仙的
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- Completed
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- 109k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
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- 3mo ago
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- Qidian
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Provincial flow: The protagonist proposes earth magic to solidify and control kidney stones, so that the weak can defeat the strong. Others were shocked and praised, thinking that it was very feasible (yes, they said that protective magic could not prevent this) and that it was an idea that could establish a sect. There is no need to pass magic resistance or other tests, and there are no additional restrictions. This setting is very bad in my opinion. We need to use the water system to drain out the water, and the wind system to drain out the air...? This largely destroys the differences between different factions, making combat a simple matter of seconds, and there is no need for non-functional spells.
The medieval style brought wisdom and shock. . . There is no logic, spells are all based on the law of cause and effect, from the explosion of the talent detection equipment 20 years ago to the attack of stones generated in the body. All show wisdom. . . Magic apprentices all have this ability, and I am afraid that only magic apprentices are left alive in this world.
In fact, the protagonist can indeed awaken the five elemental attributes based on the five elements.
In the Five Elements, wind belongs to wood, so the awakened wind element of the protagonist is considered to be of wood attribute. Thunder Rat Spirit, in fact, the protagonist can be in the awakened thunder element.
Does the author remember the title?
I came to see the collision between magic and immortality, not to see the protagonist of a fairy tale cultivating immortality in a magical world. I like many elements in the work. If you add a jade pendant to the magic world, you will be in that style. But it's only about the elements. The plot is like a trappings of a fairy tale, and the supporting characters and the main character are all just like a fairy tale. Can't we just honestly make the protagonist a mage who knows the magic of immortality? Mage! Not a wizard, nor a cultivator! The power system and power structure have too many poisonous points. The author has not carefully thought about what is the best school. The worldview among wizards is based on that! What about manipulating the kidney stones in the opponent's body? High-level apprentices don't have the resources to be waiters. Two groups of people in the school are fighting for resources. They come up with ideas one by one. None of this matters! Where is the collision between magic and magic in the title? What is the difference between this and the routine of a college loser rising to pretend to be a slap in the face? The problem is that others can still do what you can do! In addition, cheating and cheating are not on the same level at all. The author really shouldn't bother with this aspect, it's boring as hell. Tell me what I like about it, it's purely personal. The protagonist wears a fairy coat or something similar to his uniform, a jade pendant hanging from his waist, and a magic sword by his side. Once you stop there, the protagonist is the most handsome boy. Divine protagonist + Divine magic + Divine supporting cast, never win a quarrel, never lose a fight. The author actually has all the elements in place, including a cat senior, a base junior, an extremely scientific heroine and a stinker! Build! Fairy! Of! Brother, you are good at writing. I am really looking forward to this work.
Your book has been on the new book list, and its results are much better than those of other newcomers. Having just over fifty chapters, you feel that your results cannot be directly translated into the book. It means that you, the author, are completely unable to persist in writing books. You have no accumulation at all, so do you want to become a great salesperson in one fell swoop? If you plan to cut books, don't start a new one quickly. The next one will be 100% inferior to this one I suggest you spend a few months thinking about it.
In fact, I have always been curious about why Chinese translates English into "magic". There is a word in the work that describes the big devil, called "magic"! The word "devil" itself is not a good word, so... Why is the word "devil" used when translating from English to Chinese? After all, holy magic is okay, fairy magic is okay, why use "magic"? How strange... Are you implying to us that the people who do this abroad are not good people? How strange...
Alas, there are too many problems. If an orthodox magic academy can use magic on its classmates casually, isn't it a black magic academy?
There are too many poisonous points and serious setting bugs. You can watch it for fun without thinking.
Nan Bang, then you can condense the stones in other people's bodies, why can't others disperse the stones you have condensed?
There is a world like this
After Lorne awakened his memory, he found that he had traveled to a world of immortal cultivation. He was still an orphan. He knew that this world was dominated by the weak and the strong. He had no background or training resources, so he found a new way and decided to join the Demon Sect. After going through all kinds of hardships, he finally arrived at the door of the Demon Sect and prepared to join the Demon Sect. But I heard the system's voice "Congratulations on traveling to the magical world. About to join the Magic Academy
See the latest chapter 48
The future is promising. The previous ones are all pretentious and cliche. I'm not disgusted, but there is nothing new and there are some poisonous points. The biggest one at the beginning has also been mentioned by others.
So far it's okay, I just really thought I was cultivating immortality.
Damn it, I clicked on the wrong list. I thought it was a book with hundreds of thousands of words and only a few reviews. I almost had to disinfect my phone.
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. The author will update soon.
It's quite good-looking, and the world view is a bit wider.