Naruto: Ten Shadow Techniques at the Beginning, Su Nuo Jinchuuriki

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a dark and cold style, but after reading it for a while, I found out that it was about falling in love at the age of six or seven, and the author kept talking about not taking pressure, but it turned out that he didn't take voltage 😂

In the early morning of May 27th, I finished reading the revised chapters, and it was okay. After all, Satoru is a monster in the movie version, and he can't be defeated without plot killing. After improving your strength, start the next plot as soon as possible, and try not to be confused in the subsequent plot. ———————————— Now I feel that it is no longer interesting to write about the emergence of new magical monsters in the world of Naruto due to the influence of the protagonist's magical power. Between systems, either like those fan fiction writers, the curse system is spread out from the beginning because of its appearance, or it is only concentrated on the protagonist. In the middle of writing, what about the negative emotions caused by the curse affecting the other world, resulting in the emergence of new monsters? It's very boring. Isn't this the same origin as the enemy and ourselves? Originally, Naruto was just a battle between chakras, but now he added an extra spell. This reminds me of an introduction to a shadow article I saw many years ago. The content was about using a USB flash drive to enter the film and television world, and then the USB flash drive automatically brought the extraordinary power of the film and television world to reality. In the end, the protagonist needed to correct this error by himself. I thought it was a purely idle plot setting at the time, and I still think so now. I came here to see how to revive the spiritual energy, add ancient families, and inherit aristocratic families. I think many people who read this subject want to see a system in which the protagonist uses spells to fight back, and the system is used by evil people to pretend to be evil. Judging from the latest plot, there is no such tendency, or it has never been very exciting. Not to mention emotional pull, the appearance of a saint in front of people is not even a hairline. Instead, it is the kind of plot that goes directly to mediocrity. For me personally, this novel is boring if it is written like this. I personally have no desire to buy this online product. In short, I still hope that the author will consider the subsequent plot development as appropriate and how to make it interesting.

1. This book assumes that a person who is good at escape has a bright mind, so how does the author explain Obito, who is the last person to succeed? 2. When I asked Tsunade about Ninjutsu earlier, she said that there is a threshold for learning Ninjutsu. After a few chapters, she suddenly learned the Shadow Clone Technique.

It is actually not difficult to modulate Moxuluo with the Ten Shadows Technique. You only need to cut off a restraint every day, save up to percent of your own curse power, and slowly build up a gravity cannon that can kill Moxuluo instantly. The Ten Shadows Technique You can become a wheelchair in an instant. When you are in danger and the spell power is not enough, just release the restraints directly. After all, you have released the restraints on yourself. There is no cost at all. At most, the spell power cannot be saved today.

Just saw it

Really, there isn't much combat description in the whole story. The narrator, the stubborn bastard, is constantly trying to explain various moves and psychological descriptions of the characters. There is nothing related to the battle or the plot. The writing is not only incomprehensible, but also like a running account. The narration is just a die-hard narration talking about what happened and what has been done. There is no plot at all.

At present, it looks a bit like the writing style of the two eunuch books.

What the hell is yin and yang 8 to 2? You can't make a tailed beast jade. Isn't chakra spiritual energy plus physical energy?

Let me ask you how do you feel about the monster Kagura that appears in the author's latest expanded world view? The plot arranged by the author is to open the eyes of the protagonist, but to be honest, I am really unhappy with the monster designed. Original creations by fans are always controversial. I don't know if you are mostly satisfied with the author's design, or are you disgusted? I'm voting against it anyway. It's best not to have this kind of plot happen again.

After it is put on the shelves, it becomes a popular science article🤭🤭

You can refer to this book. The power is attributed to oneself or the character itself is related. You suddenly made a real person and it is too disgusting for readers. The explanation of the curse spirit in the recent chapter in the above book is reasonable. I suggest that the real person should end quickly. If you have time, it is best to overhaul it. Or delete it directly. It's the author's business. Where can I copy it? Oh no, it's not a reference to where to draw. I've given you a sample. How you write it depends on you. Don't include too many personal settings. I've seen this book now. The writing style can only be said to be average. Too many personal settings will easily lead to collapse. Write well and don't be a eunuch. Of course, don't be the King of the Sea.

The most useful spell is the reversal spell. Su Nuo's level of reversal can even resurrect a person who has just died. Even without this reversal, he can easily regenerate severed limbs, and even cure heart dissection. It can greatly improve fault tolerance. Apart from other things, he no longer has to worry about underhanded tricks like Hidan Shinji's blood.

What kind of plot is this about stewing monsters in a pot?

The first is the issue of character. After The Box of Bliss, opposition is often made for the sake of opposition. The explanation is for the sake of explanation, which seems very unnatural. The second is the episode of Box of Bliss. To sum it up in one word, it is confusion, fighting for unknown reasons, and opening eyes for unknown reasons. The whole battle was about me trying to think and understand, rather than seeing the words and seeing the pictures naturally emerge. The biggest problem I had with this book throughout reading was the lack of a sense of imagery. There were too few descriptions of the environment, but too many descriptions and it was too complicated and tiring to read. I hope the author can grasp this. The other is character description. You can try more profile descriptions, especially characters other than the protagonist. This can not only increase the sense of substitution, but also increase interaction. Let's just write this much for now. The material selection is quite good. I will continue to read it.

Writing female protagonists in Naruto is no longer popular these days. Readers are all old readers. If you don't write well, it's easy to get discouraged.

I feel that it is not as good as the Jinchuuriki of the Japanese knotweed. According to the expressiveness of the plot, Su Nuo and the Hokage will barely be able to play each other.

Is the brain attacking the cerebellum in the Box of Bliss?

Is Qidian starting to copy Tomato?

More than 60% of a chapter can explain the meaning of the dialogue. For example, if the protagonist says a sentence, the author needs to use ten sentences to explain the meaning of this sentence and why the protagonist said it It's extremely boring and boring.

This kind of introduction a few years later will all be mass-produced by studios.

No, how could Danzo be that jumpy in his early days?

I said, why do you keep writing about Danzo? Are you dead?

The title of the last Naruto novel I read was "Raising Soldiers to Luo", Already a Eunuch, I wonder what the situation will be like in this novel?

The writing is okay, but I don't like a ten-year-old child as the protagonist. I'll come back and read it when I'm an adult.

You might as well use Ten Shadow Technique as an auxiliary, Moxura can be activated but left to fight the aliens. At that time, it is just the same as the curse. In the early stage, the curse power of Su Nuo is used as a tailed beast. The curse power should be the same as chakra, which is foreign. You can treat the protagonist as an alien and play behind the scenes. The bosses in the early stage are the three classes and Nagato Orochimaru. Obito is too small. It started to get better later. When the mid-term mini-boss was behind the scenes, another kind of alien was directly introduced. Later, when fighting on the moon, he found the three alien brothers Kaguya. He casually transformed it into a magic spell mixed with chakra fairy magic to play house.

In exchange for the inability to use spell power and chakra other than thunder and water attributes, the change in the properties of thunder and water attributes is used to synthesize Arashi Release. It can be breached at any time At the price of XX, it is exchanged for the burst of mental power/Yin Release in the next short period of time. It is used to open the Sharingan. At the price of XX, it is exchanged for the rise of Yin Release in the next day/Yin and Yang balance, which is used to stabilize the fusion of Hashirama cells.

It's a very interesting book. It's a pity that it was cut. Fortunately, I didn't order all of it. What a pity.

I heard that there was a problem with the previous 50 to 60 chapters, but when I saw it, the author had already revised it, so the impact was not big. Can you let Mo Xuluo or Su Nuo come out early? I want to see blood flowing like a river.

Is there a house vs elephant plot?

As title. Hinata Hinata's mother is also pretty good