Douluo: the Martial Soul Is the Emperor of Dreams, I Am the Emperor of Heaven!

The 350,000-word limit is waived. . .

I won't watch it if the heroine has a rogue bunny.

Just because the protagonist is big can suppress the protagonist? The settings were all about pressing Dou Er, and the protagonist was forcibly suppressed. Normally, he should be invincible. However, Tianmeng was sacrificed 10,000 years in advance, and as a result, the spiritual essence was over 900,000 years old. It was scattered all over the place and entered hundreds of dreams to collect everywhere. The energy and body essence were made as if they were in Dou Er, and nothing was left by the author. The protagonist has not been upgraded at all, nor has his body been strengthened. , And there is no 100,000-year-old soul bone, and the skin is left in the seal (later, during the Ice Emperor's sacrifice, this skin suddenly appeared out of thin air, and it can obviously control the soul bone parts, not to mention the Snow Emperor's evil eye or going to Dragon Valley, Dou Yike still has the Demon Whale King who can use it as a trunk bone, but he still got a 400,000-year-old Ice Emperor's torso bone like Dou Er, and this is just copying the original work). As for Xiao Wu, the second ring tricked Xiao Wu into offering sacrifices with the help of armor. As a result, the soul bone skills and soul ring skills are the same as the original work, and the position of the soul bone is also the same as the original work. Can you not write without the original work? Moreover, the protagonist's body has not been strengthened much after absorbing the energy of a hundred thousand years of soul rings and soul bones. He only upgraded his level from level 20 to level 30. The setting of combining soul ring energy and soul bones to strengthen the body no longer exists?

It's really not good to read. It's like reading the outline. I suddenly traveled around and started too fast. I can't see the growth or daily life, not even the rustling. It's better to condense it into 350,000 words and finish it.

Alas, it's a bit poisonous, poisonous, and there are also problems between his sentences. There are also problems with the paragraphs, and they are poisonous at the beginning. You would rather be that kind of poisonous person in love than I would say anything.

Actually zzz, I think the most suitable place to appear is the third part of Douluo Dalu: The Legend of the Dragon King. Disaster corresponds to the Golden Dragon King, and order corresponds to the Silver Dragon King. That is, Meng Tianzun is the Dragon God. Of course, the combat power does not correspond to that. The upper limit of combat power must be higher than Meng Tianzun. I just think this correspondence is a little more consistent.

As the saying goes, if you want to write special shots, just write special shots; if you want to make fantasy, just do it well! You have to play something that is not available! Why, do you look big? Douluo still has to get together with Tang, can't he afford to live? Do you think it was the cold-blooded killers of ancient feudal times who were soft-hearted or that the hammer of the Titled Douluo was just a decoration? As a person, you can be mediocre or incompetent, but you can't be arrogant! Weakness and ignorance are not obstacles to survival, arrogance and prejudice are attitudes that make you unable to get along with others!

It's okay, mainly because there aren't many books written about zzz

The protagonist has no chivalry, so retreat quickly

Tsk, this protagonist is even more outrageous than Lan Xuanyu. He is a Ultimate Douluo at the age of seven.

Awakening zzz drive is the subject of martial arts. I have an idea, but I haven't written it yet Logically speaking, I think the order of unlocking the forms should be like this The first soul ring absorbs the power soul beast, unlocks impact and other red capsules The second soul ring absorbs the wind/water attribute soul beast, unlocks airflow and other blue capsules The third soul ring absorbs the life attribute soul Beast, unlocks recovery and barrier The fourth soul ring unlocks miracles and gravity The fifth soul ring absorbs the thunder attribute soul beast, unlocks plasma The sixth soul ring unlocks the propeller The seventh soul ring Martial Soul Avatar unlocks the King of Disaster The eighth soul ring unlocks the Emperor of Order The ninth soul ring unlocks Super Dream Tianzun The capsule star level can be increased by increasing the age of the soul ring.

When will Mewtwo appear?

Too white. . . . . . Can't bear it

I think the writing is okay, but why don't many people comment?