From Fetus to Godhood

It feels like there are a lot of settings and it's tiring to watch. And I thought Daojun was a majestic person, but it turned out that he was a loli and didn't hold his nerve, which was a bit of a drama.

It's quite interesting, but it has a bit of a pornographic feel to it, and there are too many emotional scenes. I still need to adjust the proportion to the main plot.

First author, please consider switching to light novels. The works you write are really not popular in fantasy. The character setting is incompatible with fantasy. It's fine in light novels, but it's really hard to get over in fantasy. The second setting is too complicated. I personally feel that the author is not the reincarnation of an alien demon or an old monster. I doubt that the author can grasp it? Thirdly, this book lacks something eye-catching, and feels like it is tasteless and a pity to discard. Of course, I read it as a light novel. If I read it as a fantasy, I would probably run away. Seeing the author's positive response, I wrote this post. I hope the author doesn't mind. Finally, I wish the author a fortune.

Not bad. It has new ideas and a power system. It was a bit too much when I first watched it and I couldn't remember it, but it's still very good to ignore the plot. You can take a good look at it, it has potential.

No, if you write about a fetus, just write about the fetus, and control the mother's body before she is born. Why don't you just turn on the mecha?

I stopped watching it when the so-called father appeared in Chapter 18. I don't know what happened. It was fine at the beginning, but I lost interest in reading it.

Some are too procrastinating. In more than 100 pictures, the main character is still in the infant stage. How to write the teenager, adolescent and young adult stage later. Moreover, the world view is very grand. There are so many professional settings to describe the Star Realm, the Imperial Road, and the Ten Thousand Races, and there are also some shadows of group portraits. I will definitely focus on describing the growth of my parents in the future. The difference between you and veteran authors is that you don't control enough time. You write too detailedly and you describe every aspect. If you want to write about a young genius, it's okay to write a protagonist who is too awesome. But during the genius test, the character of the young genius was already established. Why do you want to add a scene where he helps people catch the ghost mother? This scene that forcibly depicts the protagonist as being awesome is really too much. But I probably guessed the general direction of this scene, and it probably has something to do with my sister-in-law. Also, the baby stage is really too long. Even if you write about this stage, we will find it boring. The people who read the book are adults or teenagers who cannot understand that they are very awesome babies.

You're not the author. Why did you write down some very disgusting plots in such detail? This is a novel. It's disgusting if you write it in such detail, isn't it? 🤔🤔🤔

It's hard to stretch, and it smells like a light novel at the beginning 🤭

The author takes a trumpet and re-reads the first fifty chapters from the reader's perspective. The reader's main perspective is the fetus. This is a fantasy theme. I will make my own choices when reading sweet articles. I read chapters 1-20 page by page. Chapters 20 to almost 50 felt so awkward that I didn't even want to click on the title. The main focus of your book is the fantasy fetus. After chapter 20, you jump to its many aspects and parents fall in love. It feels very strange.