Douluo Dalu: From the Start, I Receive the Love God's Trial, but Love My Old Self

Too bland. Say yes to cupid. But in fact, it does not reflect the characteristics of the god of love at all. There is simply such a person. Just give it to him. Melon is still that kind of little guy. The interaction with Wuhun is also abstract for the sake of abstraction, and funny for the sake of funny. Basically just dialogue. It's getting boring. To put it bluntly, Chen Haozhi's little imagination supports him until one day his inspiration runs out. There is a high probability that I will just stop writing like before.

Human love is also love (

After some searching, I found out what "love you old self" means. I think the idea itself is quite interesting, but the author's writing is not strong enough, and there is too little interaction between the male protagonist and Wuhun. If we can refer to Star Iron's fireworks and sparks, the male protagonist and Wuhun are fighting each other. It feels quite interesting. Secondly, the plot is too flat, and there is no exciting plot even in the paid chapters...

I'm speechless. The Ice and Fire Eyes are the burial ground for two god-king-level corpses. The Dragon Valley is the tomb of a series of dragon souls. The Ice and Fire Eyes with the same name are first and second level gods. They are cheap And join the Noumenon Sect. You can just find a bigger city in Tianhun and show your martial soul. The Noumenon Sect or the royal family will come to you the next day. Do you need to bluff and deceive for a few days and then fool Long Aotian?

Whenever I feel that the inspiration for Douluo fandom has dried up, someone will write a thunder turd to pollute my eyes.

It's great, great, it's updated, it won't be like the previous Fu Fu book.

Please, please update it quickly. I beg you, author mother, please update one more episode. I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. Just one episode and one more update.

The plot advancement speed is about the same as that of a snail It took more than 20 pictures before I started to absorb the soul ring The previous pictures have been grinding and grinding, and the advancement of the plot is 0 It looks very tortured. What a pity, such a good idea. In fact, there are many good ways to write this idea, but it was wasted. I gave up after reading dozens of chapters before. This time I came back to see the result and wanted to give it up I hope the author can polish the writing more Write the plot outline well, don't rush the duck to get it on the shelves, and don't overwhelm the plot. The writing is almost as good as it is

I write a fanfic, I love my own Wuhun, but what I write is getting more and more disgusting. It's true that readers are becoming more and more kind-hearted now. It's so disgusting to read at this time, don't you respond? Just like Luo Sanpao, you are a replica of Yu Xiaogang, but you have changed your martial spirit from a pig to a female version of yourself. If you are so good at this God of Love, you can defeat Tang San or find another way, but what disgusts you is that this God of Love can only be regarded as a second-level god, and is controlled by Tang San, like a clown.

666 Has recently come up with something new. Wuhun is a sex-changed self 😄 and loving oneself is literal love, right? 🪖 Japanese?