Begin Physical Sanctification from Hunyuan Gong

In this way, can the plot not disgust readers with his family members? From the moment he was sold, he was no longer family. Is this kind of family member used to repeatedly disgust people? Or did you write it without typing?

With your level of literature, you still dare to write an article about siblings looking at each other with affection? ? ! !

You can read it without using your brain. As a time traveler, your brain is not as good as that of ordinary people among the indigenous people. He did some actions that disgusted the readers, but did not give any explanation. He simply said that the protagonist wanted to do this. I don't know what the author thought.

You can practice and upgrade by killing people. If you are still practicing hard, what's the use of your golden finger?

"There are brave men who walk alone with swords." What is the world view of your introduction? Are there goblins?

The title is about physical sanctification, but the content is about learning sword skills. No matter how powerful the sword skills are, there is no strengthening of the body.

Although I sold you for money, we are still a family!

Thank you🙏🏻Shen Nong, luckily I didn't watch it

I hope that other sects will learn martial arts, so I can't help but throw myself into the street. It is used for killing and robbing.

May I ask what is the use of writing Chapters 2 and 3? Irrigation?

It's good-looking, the characters' emotions change and the narrative is natural, but the current volume is too small, and the book has the potential to become a hit!

Robot🤖passing by🤓

From the first chapter, you can see how poor the author's writing is. As for the structure of the book, you don't need to look at it, because the structure of novels of the same type is the same, and Qidian novels are indeed getting worse and worse.

I feel like there are too many words in one chapter. It would be better if it was divided into two chapters.

It's all fucking put on the shelves. One chapter a day, a bunch of data and a small number of words?

Each chapter is too long and should be fixed at 15 or 20 points. In this way, readers will subscribe according to the plot progress. If you feel that there is content, book a chapter, and if there is no content, just skip to book a chapter. It will definitely be better than your 40 or 50 points per chapter, right? Readers spend 50 subscription points to check in and find out that they are not interested in the plot or the water content. Isn't this as uncomfortable as swallowing a fly? You have to give readers the right to choose!

The logic is self-consistent, the plot is reasonable, no flaws, fairy grass

It was a little bit toxic at the beginning, but after it was put on the shelves, I let myself go and it felt pretty good.

The author has some ideas. None of the seven novels has exceeded one million yuan.

There is a problem with the introduction. God rewards those who work hard and get a permanent certificate, but they still dislike it.

Giving birth soon? It's over so quickly

Ha, I've finished another book and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Monthly tickets and recommendation votes are given to you, please be serious, author

Wonderful, cheers for the author.

I'll give you all the monthly recommendation votes. Come on, keep up the good work. What you've written so far is very good, very good.

Are there any new books? I feel like what you wrote before is pretty good.

Oops, the more you write, the worse the quality will be. Keep it first. If it doesn't work, cut it up.