This NPC Is Too Loyal

If you read the introduction and want to be an emperor, your loyalty will be deducted. Just change it to a man who wants to be the emperor.

The protagonist starts off just like the investigator, and the first incident is too long and boring to do.

You read that right, Qing Huanyu was originally an immortal. He had a great dream in the void on Qingluan Peak. He dreamed that he was holding the Dark Sword +21 and lost his way in the big library... Later, he wandered to Yanan and did blood therapy. When he went to the sewers to hunt the big fat pig at night, he accidentally fell into the junction and met a woman named Melina. They talked happily, but they just hated that Melina was a piece of wood. He went crazy and burned himself... When he went to Skyrim to slay a dragon, he was frozen into an old popsicle. He took the blue toothpick of the old world and went to the new world to play with shields and axes. Finally, he went crazy in Elgaard and danced with two swords. He became a gangster in Hyrule, forgot about the princess, and cooked on the back of the white dragon... Later he He has starved in the Eternal Realm, met a digger in the colony, raised unruly people in the Era, tamed dinosaurs in the Ark, and slept with Palu... He is a brave man who is addicted to sex, a beast hunter in Azeroth, robbed in Los Santos, 007 in the Cuckold Valley, escaped life in Midgar, had sex with Aunt Wang in Raccoon City, and likes to discuss business with Mr. Bear He knows how to work, he is the famous V, he has been in dungeons and is the fifth crazy person, he has driven piles in the Witcher Continent, he is the man who sold the world, he is the sword master (thief) from Skarlitz, he has stolen hearts in the palace, the murderer is Nanako, he has begged in the vision space, he has been Joel and taken care of a baby, he just hates to have a golf club smashed on his head... Boss Lei became the final winner, why, Miyang, don't you want to accompany me... I like Nia, and everyone!

The writing is incomprehensible. It talks a lot about the settings, but few of them are explained clearly.

Traveling through the game, the system, but also investigating the case and reasoning, I feel that the author went a little off, or that the idea did not achieve the desired effect. The first two categories should be labeled as enjoyable writing, but there seems to be no sense of this aspect. As a systematic time-traveler, he is completely written by a native. If he doesn't mention a few words in the middle, he can't tell that the protagonist has traveled through the game. Of course, this is nothing. The key point is that the system is combined with the current plot development like a decoration. It has no function that a system article should have, and there are no hooks. There is no sense of satisfaction. I think this is caused by the label of detective reasoning. Detective reasoning and system writing can I can't say if it can't be combined, but it's obvious that the author didn't combine it well. The plot is too flat. There are no puzzles solved in dozens of chapters, and the process is not exciting. Several categories of labels are not clear, and the investigation is not exciting. The main point is the main plot. At the end of the introduction, "He found that he has shouldered the fate of the entire world." More than 80 chapters have not been written to the last sentence of the introduction. The main task has not been released. I think some readers of this book have exhausted their patience. It is best for the author to slow down.

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Loyalty, reminds me of what people say online about loyalty in ancestral traditions.