I'm Really Not a Magician

Should I also pursue it?

What? A tender cat girl grew out of the angry tentacles.

The subject matter is very novel and the beginning is interesting, but later on the pace feels too fast, even a bit rushed. After telling an event in two or three chapters, there is no breathing room and it goes directly to the next event that needs to be told in two or three chapters. If I still write according to this rhythm, I feel that it will be completed in 700-800,000 words. After all, there is a saint to save in the current plot, and it will be faster every day, so it is understandable. But while running around, I inserted the plot of the male protagonist ⭐️having sexual desire and ⭐️harassing the cat girl, which made me feel a bit overwhelmed. Why do you think it's so frustrating? Because the plot doesn't give you any breathing space to shape and promote the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It's a bit abrupt for two people who are "friends" to suddenly do something like this. It doesn't feel like something natural. The male protagonist is still too ⭐️ depressing! Furthermore, the male protagonist's early level is very low, but he has arranged several events that he cannot solve at this stage. It seems that he is preparing to use them as foreshadowing and will talk about it later. It would be best if the event could be recycled, but this way of writing is really easy to write and then forget. For example, the broken spear given by the crazy knight and the arrow given by the Elf Queen all hinted to Wang Cheng and his party that "this time is very dangerous and will definitely be used." As it turns out, the male protagonist extinguished the female protagonist's flame and prepared to travel around the world! Chekhov's gun is really just decoration. Also, when the male protagonist returns from a life-threatening trial, he doesn't even say a word to the cat girl, and goes directly to the saint to prepare for a trip around the world. The cat girl is only tender, true love is the saint, the cat girl is in tears 😢

Please add a female knight role, I can do anything

Your top priority right now is to survive until it's on the shelves

Unfortunately, I never saw this book when I was scanning the list. It was put on the shelves today, so I pushed it to my page.

I hope some pornographic content will be added to this book once it survives. It's not strong enough now

As long as there is no supervision, at least I will chase it to the end.

If there is another round of recommendations, I will post an update. Please don't support books, please.