Rebirth 1988: Little Tailor to Business Giant

What kind of mess, one sentence on the left is arrogant on the other, the other on the right is arrogant, the boss doesn't look like a boss.

The paragraph is too long, so it is better to study it with a major in theology. The paragraph is too long and uncomfortable to read on mobile phone. A little suggestion

Add an introduction; the text should be divided into more paragraphs, not long paragraphs; the text should be concise and precise; and find other authors to promote each other, the data should be available! A personal opinion, not necessarily correct, but a direction to try!

In fact, there is another suggestion. Now that you are practicing, you can try different writing methods. I feel that the style is still the same now. The writing style is okay, but the narrative style is more of a running account. Novel must have conflicts and emotional ups and downs in order to "catch" the readers' eyes. Conversations between characters, plot conflicts, emotional ups and downs, different thoughts of people who encounter different things, and interest disputes, etc., Can all be written down. Without it, it will be difficult to write a long article; and it will also be difficult to attract readers. I am still very interested in using clothing as an entry point. It would be great if I could really write about this process brilliantly. After all, few people write about this entry point. After reading again today, I have some ideas, but they may not be right!