I'm Really Not a Pokémon Trainer!

I feel that the development of the world view is too concise, and there is too little description of the environment. The reader cannot form a specific picture of the world you describe in one or two chapters. Secondly, the part about the incubation base is too lengthy and the development is too delayed. The interaction between the protagonist and Qingmei. There are too many animations, but too little interaction with Yoyo. What readers want to see is actually the bond between humans and elves, and they hope to focus on the relationship and growth between the protagonist and elves In the end, the writing style gives people an unnatural feeling. Is it written by the author before? I feel like the writing has a greenish feel to it. It is recommended that readers read similar works with the same theme as "Unscientific Beast Control" and learn from the great writing skills of other authors.