Dr. Strange in the Horror World

Ridiculously better job to switch from funeral home to patrol officer?

It feels like there is a lack of some transitional chapters that integrate information.

The story is well written, but the author needs to train on writing. The current story is too dry. What you need to learn now is to count the words.

After reading Chapter 7, I felt that Chapter 6 was a bit poisonous. It's a bit funny to gamble with your own safety and the safety of your family that the monster will not kill people. There is no explanation that if you don't complete this task, you will not be able to start the next one. It's a bit poisonous to have to do this.

The protagonist is a weirdo, the system is its rules, and the protagonist just executes them. For this world, the protagonist is not curious or engaged, and only focuses on the task. To put it bluntly, the system forces the male protagonist to observe the world, but where is the fun in this?

There is an official organization of extraordinary beings, and the protagonist has to pretend to be in front of them, and he has to spend his own money to fight monsters when they go together. Others have been subjected to cognitive changes, and think that the protagonist is fine.

How should I put it? Starting from Hui Xin, it started to feel less satisfying. The start was pretty good.

Chapter 1, why is there chapter 31 at the beginning?