The City God Is Above

The reason why I wrote about a little girl was purely because I needed an anchor point. According to my setting, the protagonist needs to develop offline, so he must have subordinates offline, and this will inevitably involve an issue, the identity of the protagonist. (This is also the reason why many people don't like little girls) But I must say that even according to my original outline design, the little girl was purely used to tie up the protagonist's men. Because the protagonist saved the little girl as the city god, her sister was willing to do things for the protagonist without reservation. I have always mentioned this later. Even in the original outline, the little girl had no plot, she was just a plot character in her own right. When I first wrote this, some readers raised their opinions, so I fine-tuned the subsequent plot. The little girl basically never went online. I only used this to strengthen her loyalty to the protagonist when the squad leader acted. Of course, readers will misunderstand that this is a question of poor writing on my part, because the original intention was to show the innocence and ignorance of the little girl, who knows nothing, but this was not presented in advance, causing the readers to see what the little girl said first. And now I have completely changed the plot so that this situation no longer occurs. I believe that most of you are readers of Seizhu, and I am also a reader of Seizhu. Although the writing is not good, I will definitely not make the mistake of exposing the identity of the protagonist. Whether it is the plot I have written now or the outline I will outline later, it is absolutely, absolutely, absolutely impossible for the protagonist to reveal his identity! ! ! The highlight itself is the obscene development, how could I possibly sacrifice the good for the weak? Anyone who appears next to the protagonist and comes into contact with the identity of the City God has multiple insurances - life-saving grace, loyal believers, and the protagonist's deliberate concealment. The minimum is these three layers of protection.

It feels very bland, with a tasteless taste that is a pity to throw away.

Qidian's new book issue policy has changed. In addition to the proportion of monthly tickets, the proportion of readers' follow-up reading and comments has increased, especially follow-up reading. So I hope readers who enjoyed reading it will read more and comment more, thank you! ! ! The author will try his best to write a good plot and make everyone laugh. (The above all means that if everyone is satisfied with the reading, you can pay attention to it and do not force it. What is important is that you are happy and comfortable reading it) Finally, I wish all readers to find the books they like to read! There will never be a shortage of books! Thanks!

It's interesting, why is there no one?

Don't read the comments and write directly. People who have experienced it have suggestions.

I just started watching it. Post a comment and it will show that it exists.

The Lord is a novel that I accidentally read when I was in high school. I was shocked at the time because it perfectly hit my liking. However, the author is so stupid that he is a eunuch 😡😡😡 I think this book is okay (the book is in short supply), and I hope the author will work hard to finish it (no eunuch 😡)

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It's really well written, there's no big problem

The writing is not bad, the setting is improved compared to the one set by The Master a few years ago, and the author is also very careful in his writing techniques. There are no major problems after reading more than 90 chapters so far, and it is worth pursuing. But I haven't signed a contract yet, so I'll work harder! Sign up early and save more manuscripts! With the support of a few monthly votes, and readers bringing in private goods, the writing technique and literary talent of "Starting from Birds" feel very suitable for learning, and the author can refer to it.

Keep writing well, quality is better than quantity

Write what you think and don't read the comment section too much

There's not much else, it's mainly the same old routine, it's not interesting when you see a little girl or something like that.

Did someone change the writing later? The style of painting is different?