Literary Master: Starting by Refusing to Be a Child Star

This pig-horned mother is too dissuaded...

The author's writing is good, and the main rhythm should be better grasped. The mother of the protagonist is considered a villain. According to the way of writing online articles, you have to let the readers see the price paid by this character, and you have to do it as soon as possible. If you want to delay the appearance of this price and make the readers endure it, you have to change the perspective of description, and the mother cannot appear in the storyline and what is missed by harming the protagonist. This kind of missed plot can be mentioned but cannot appear often, otherwise it will make the readers feel frustrated. And the role of the stepfather is not visible at present. Is it just to provide the role of sister?

Why did Lao Ma push such a short book?

Do you pin the protagonist's revenge on fate, getting into a car accident? It's better to just write that the main character didn't come back to life and died. His mother was caught by the child care system and sent to jail for rehabilitation. She's crazy.

I thought it was the daily life of Wenzhao Gong, but it turned out to be a battle between me and my vicious mother and stepfather in time travel💩

This protagonist's mother, if you can't find a way to get rid of him, what are you doing?

Alas, the disadvantage of getting it too early. The number of words is too small. I feel annoyed when I see this. When are we going to deal with him? It's really uncomfortable to catch up

What does it mean to have a kind-hearted sister in such an inexplicable family? Not as good as everyone being evil

Just keep writing to the end, no matter if it sucks or not, just think of it as practice.

The new book recommended by Lao Ma is a bit too new. It only has 19,000 words so far, not even 20,000 words.