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It's okay, but the portrayal of you as the male protagonist is a bit too soft, and the emotions are written a bit too hard.
This plot should not be detailed,
You write a novel, not outline a framework. 🤐 When I got to the confession scene around chapter 40, I obviously felt that the pace was very rushed, and it felt like it was rushed. Moreover, it will not describe the popularity of the song from the audience and online comments. It's just a blank description of praise, that doesn't work. The first part is fine, but why does it fall apart later?
It's so sweet, I'm hungry!
This candy is tooth-droppingly sweet, bro.
Sweet for the sake of sweetness, the plot was written just for the sake of sweetness
Who says there is no good domestic science fiction😡
Brain?
Chapter 23: It's a bit ridiculous, it feels like my brain was stored when I was writing~
It's very difficult to write an entertainment article well.
Sweet? But I don't think it's sweet enough. Increase the intensity.
🌿 I've eaten again. Okay.
The writing is good👌🏻 but there are too many minor plot issues!