Exiled? I’m Done Pretending. The Whole Family Will Listen to Me

It's very beautiful, come and stay!

This is a book that was delayed by the title, but the writing is quite good. The heroine was a bit cowardly in the early stage, but she is quite good at pretending. After she unleashes her true nature, she should show off her talents, but I haven't seen it yet.

The article is very interesting, but can the timeline not be too complicated? Originally, there are many characters in the hegemony novel. You also need to write about other forces. You write the front for a while and then turn around and come back to write the back. It's so tiring to read and brainstorm. A simple example is that I have written about the whaling pair coming back, and then I turned around and came back to write the dialogue between the heroine and them before setting off, and then immediately jumped to the plot of their return. If you write this way, you will blind yourself, okay? It's like waiting for another time-travelling person. The arrival timeline has been more than a month and it hasn't come yet. Didn't you say that you want to redeem the main character of the Du family? It has already been written before, but later it was changed to a whale hunt and the return. The timeline is becoming more and more complicated by the author, and the readers will become more and more tired as they read. It is originally a chapter-following read, and it is not read directly at once. If you make it complicated like this, the readers will forget the character line and timeline after reading for a few days. Once they forget some plots, they will not find the feeling while following the text, and will abandon the text if they don't want to read it.

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A small comment: the heroine always calls Li Xi by her first name in front of her subordinates and even her children. This is rude behavior in both modern and ancient times.