Fengdu Liangzhou

I just spent a few minutes reading the chapters that have been updated so far. I have a few questions. Is this Zhang Gui a time traveler? At present, except for the somewhat inconsistent Silk Road (a concept proposed by modern foreigners) in the article, I can't see any traces of time travel, which leads me to another question, why should Zhang Gui be the protagonist? If the aborigines are the protagonists of the novel, and there are no added hooks, then the plot direction should be completely consistent with history. So why is there any need to write this book? The five chaos in China and the simultaneous establishment of 16 countries will still happen. The meaning of reading this novel will be lost. It is better to read the translation of the history book. There are still some problems with the selection of the protagonist. He is an old man in his 40s. Readers do not know anything about his life. During the 16-nation period, there was not even a strong man with unified strength. This led to the fact that if the protagonists were unified in this way, they would have to work for at least 60 years. Normal readers would not like it. For this similar opening, I think it is more appropriate for the protagonist to be a time traveler and travel to Zhang Gui's son. This is a bit more interesting and adds some variables, which can attract readers to a certain extent. As for the plot, there are only these few chapters so far, and I can't see any problems. Also, there are too many large paragraphs. You can divide it into more paragraphs appropriately, so that it doesn't look so tiring. Now this large paragraph seems really tired and I can't read it anymore. When writing articles and novels, you must learn to divide it into reasonable paragraphs.