When He Was in Qin, He Was in Charge of the Snare

When I was killing the old general, I was touched by that ordinary woman. When I touched it nearby, I realized that with this kind of vigilance, I was still practicing martial arts when I was still in the trap.

No one can beat the protagonist, or else the fight will be very difficult. He is very tough-talking and very pretentious.

The protagonist is a bitch. Yan Lingji tried to kill the protagonist several times. The protagonist also used her as the heroine. And as a killer, she actually let the subordinates decide the superiors. Damn, I am really speechless. Basically, it can be concluded that this book has no potential and is extremely poisonous.

I see you, the author, again. Tell me, author, how many words of eunuch you plan to write 😥

Poison Luowang's most famous killer, the first echelon of the Qin Dynasty's force value, actually has to go to the secret room every time to watch the tiger practice courage. It's better to tie a sword and put it on the bedside. I was poisoned after reading one chapter. I envy Akaishi after the second chapter

When Qin Shi sees a bunch of heroines, just run away

The net will only have a code name. If you take the water cut off, it will be cut off the water. Why don't you give yourself a name?

The author has never seen a woman? The protagonist in this novel feels as if he has been possessed by a woman as soon as he meets a woman. Yan Lingji's place is like this, and here comes a girlfriend who is exactly the same as her before time travel.

Many fan fictions have a lot of toxic points, but the most important thing for people to read them is that the plot may have some problems, but if you still want to use the emotional drama of the heroine to attract readers, you must be cautious. The plot you wrote is just too sexy, and the emotional line is full of flaws. A group of pure and coquettish characters like Tian Mi will kill her with one shot after writing dark spots, or ignore her, and Yan Lingji. The female characters in Tianxing are quite rubbish, and their character design cannot be established. The Yan Lingji you wrote has jumped like this several times and is about to kill the protagonist. You still want to accept him. What's going on depends on how good-looking she is. Now that the prequels have been written, the best choice is Yan Fei. The love brain is super strong and has a good brain (except for the case where the love brain is high). If Donghuang Taiyi doesn't come out, he will be the head of the Yin Yang family. The road to the Qin Kingdom through the Yin Yang family relies on the overall view and foresight of the traveler. If you have the platform and resources, you can still be a time traveler. Why can't you do something good? Maintain your body and protect Qin or replace it. The second is the end. Murong and Xue Nu, these two original works have attracted a large number of fans, and the characters and storylines are also perfect. If not, you can also try the somewhat contrasting Xiao Meng from Taoism. For most Qin Shi fans now, the heroines of Tianjiu are very average. They don't really want the protagonist to start in Korea and then pretend to be a woman. What they want more is to change the plot. However, whether you are helping Qin or destroying Qin, you have to write your own characteristics. Either the plot is good or the emotional line is good. You are not doing both right now.

That's it? In the past few days, because Yan Lingji was relatively famous in Qin Shiji, she had been able to provoke all kinds of things? If he bites the protagonist later, he will be killed directly. I admire the author for his good writing. The result is that as long as the protagonist is famous and popular, even if he poops on the protagonist's head, the protagonist will be a ninja, right?

Slip away, it's another dog-licking protagonist, angry just because someone looks the same as his ex-girlfriend in a previous life. No wonder no one is watching.

When I look at this resume, it's hard to think positively.

I'm curious, aren't those killers all named after swords? They are all just tools and don't have their own names. Doesn't the sword the protagonist wields become a tool?

I really don't understand it, it's just about writing female characters. Is it so important? Let's just write normally. Why do you lose your IQ when you see a woman? Many novels have been written on this. It is obviously very good, but as soon as I see a woman. My IQ dropped right there. If you don't know how to write this kind of emotional stuff, then just let him get over it. You obviously can't write, but you have to insist on writing. You don't have the ability. What are you going to do? Now he no longer implements the dog-licking economy. You said you wrote so many words and worked so hard. The female characters you write are nothing. You have to write them and all your efforts are wasted. You are scolded. Do you feel comfortable? Don't you read or think about the things you like? After writing, we set off. Well, when you write a novel, can you list the characteristics and characteristics of each character separately, and compare what you have written to see if the protagonist you created matches your plot? The plot of the killer acting as a licking dog. The plot of being his mother's wronged son. The author doesn't even think about it. You deserve to be thrown into the street

The killer wants to ambush a group of veterans crawling out of the sea of ​​​​blood in a mountain of corpses in one place. He specially kills someone the day before, or decapitates him. You must know that the blood spray from beheading can spray half of the room, and flow all over the floor. In ancient times, they were all made of wood, and they were afraid that others would not be able to smell the blood.

I originally wanted to read this novel. After all, there are not many martial arts novels nowadays, and the sentiment of Qin Shimingyue is here. But after reading the comments, there were a lot of curses, and some said that the protagonist is a dog licker. I really don't like to read this kind of novel.

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Should I collect all the beauties? The content of Qin Shi Mingyue World did not select all the beauties. If I collected all the beauties, it would not attract the interest of reading the novel.

When I read the title of the book, it was nonsense.

Come with me to the factory 🤓

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I also gave up, one chapter a day, no contract, and I felt like I was going to be too late.