Shulong Daojun

No, I've read three chapters, and the protagonist's name bothers me. The word "scale" is too uncomfortable. I'll say goodbye 🙏

In fact, the writing is really good. . The name is rare but not particularly weird. . .

How can I put it? The wording and sentences are so illogical and in vain that it is really tiring to watch. Sometimes when watching a plot, you have to react for a while before you can understand the plot 🙂

One: Establishing the foundation and refining oneself for nine years Two: Obtaining spiritual charm, condensing the Tao womb, and attaining the human immortality level      Three realms of the human immortality level (solid form, extending life, and living in the world) Three: Establishing three hundred meritorious deeds and proving the earthly immortality level Four: Divine immortality level Five: One thousand and two hundred meritorious deeds, proving the heavenly immortality level

It's pretty good, the name isn't a problem

It can be considered as food and can be eaten with peace of mind, but it just stepped on my minefield regarding a certain incident. The previous writing is okay, but it is different from popular fantasy writing. The writing style is more literary. The main character in the book is from a very powerful force. There is no other sect or orthodox school. They can also be in charge of Shinto. The master of the main character is also the current top combat power. But it came to an abrupt end in Chapter 56. The forces that were written so well were directly taken advantage of by the Demon Sect, and some of their own high-level combat forces rebelled. The protagonist's backing master was temporarily offline 😅. After stirring up a bucket, the demon sect exited safely, and the traitor was unscathed and still won people's hearts. The decent here just said a few words... When I saw this, I jumped directly, and I no longer had the desire to follow chapter by chapter. The writing style after jumping to the back was not as sophisticated. It gave me the feeling that it had become a popular fantasy novel.

Very well written! Fortunately, the name of the protagonist is fine.

Investigation report: "No." -622 Investigation target: "Shu Long Taojun" - the male protagonist - [Scale Book] Investigation result: [Reincarnation (Awakening of Su Hui)] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on April 23, 2026

The golden finger I wrote was about cultivating all things into dragons, and the introduction I wrote was about cultivating ten thousand dragons and building a history of dragons. What next? The content is about working as a labor force for NPC cheating in a small sect in the countryside. He wastes time fishing for goldfish every day and does not raise it. He finally encounters a goldfish with a little dragon blood and kills it directly. Then he suddenly turns around and realizes that he can use other methods to waste so much time. What next? Do you think you raised a spiritual beast with dragon blood? No, it was the protagonist who followed the path of a small sect in the countryside and slowly practiced like a native. He practiced special skills that no one has learned in thousands of years. You Golden Finger didn't say that you can practice them. It was the author who cheated again and made the protagonist inexplicably learn the skills that no one has learned in thousands of years. The following plot is about an ordinary protagonist who has forgotten the golden finger and is wallowing in the quagmire in order to compete with other ordinary sects in the countryside. He has always been involved in sect struggles, fighting for a small profit, and there is no content about using golden fingers to raise countless dragons.

Well, if you raise a dragon, will you gain immortality?

I think it's pretty good, keep writing~

Anyone can turn into a dragon, it's just a fart

I can accept Leng Bing Ning's love story Meng Cuishuang. The author chose a book title to suit what he wanted to write. He must think he is a genius.