Lord of Dimensions

How weird! The introduction is like martial arts. When you go in, you can see the stream of consciousness pseudo-sci-fi. The perspective is high-dimensional, alienated, and emotionless, making it hard to be convinced. And the protagonist is considered a fallen genius? There is no clear explanation for the previous sinking of more than ten years, implying class differences? But it is not unclear, the golden finger setting is like a warlock, and the time travel and pre-time travel adult Taoist settings are also sudden, which is not only sudden but also aggravates the fragmentation. The inexplicable feeling is too strong!

It's abstract. To be honest, I don't know what the relationship between the protagonist and that woman is, but I think it's simply inexplicable to use a martial arts competition as an invitation and say that if he wins, the protagonist will accompany him to a place with a high death rate when he knows that he can't achieve his true results.

Doesn't the author know how to use punctuation and paragraphing?

First, the writing method of stream of consciousness is very strange Second, the gap between the level and the map is too big, which is inconsistent with common sense. It stands to reason that the higher-ups would send people down for such a big thing, but the result is still a bunch of little shrimps. The sense of fragmentation is too serious. You deleted the martial arts you wrote earlier and changed the beginning. , None of them have much impact on the future. Logically speaking, your starting point with martial arts should be martial arts, but you don't feel it at all.

The whole book feels very strange and inexplicable. Many of the protagonist's actions are illogical and the world view is not developed.

The world view is relatively novel and beautiful 😆

A bit abusive. I don't know what the point of torturing the protagonist is in today's novels. They are all time travellers. To put it bluntly, real life is not hard enough, right