A Tokyo Life with Save-Point Reloads

Come on Feisang, it's so beautiful!

The writing is really nice. Why is the data so poor? There may be something wrong with the starting point recommendation mechanism 😭😭

Can the author finish it? If you dare to write about your grades, I won't even dare to subscribe. I quite liked the previous free chapters.

When did you write Gui Gongjin's emotional line? I really like the feeling of their brains and calculations with each other. This kind of emotional ups and downs, like a fight, there are back and forth, with some Shura fields and emotions interspersed before and after. When getting along with other female protagonists, they are constantly reborn and have a tendency to crush each other. Although it is also very exciting, it is a bit aesthetically fatigued. After chasing after it, I always want to read, and there is no sense of expectation or surprise.

This Shura field was very enjoyable to write, very exciting 😌

Written entirely on my pleasure belt

Watching it all at once, so cool😃

I rarely post, so I read this book that I picked up in the afternoon and caught up on it all afternoon. The latest update is No. 19, And the update time was 18 hours ago. I thought the writing was good but the data was poor, so I looked through the comment area. When I saw the problems some people mentioned, I thought carefully about them and they indeed exist. When I read this book, I really liked the pull, or attack and defense, between the male and female protagonists. I liked this process very much. Back to when most people come in after seeing the title or introduction of the book, their expectations are how the heroine "blackened", what key things happened at which key points, and how will the hero save her? The reader gets very little information from a God's perspective. He sees the male protagonist doing this, but he doesn't know why the male protagonist does this? There is no information, no expectations, and it is all driven by the author's delicate description, so he will feel tired and he doesn't know what he should expect to happen. I don't want to teach the author how to write a book. I think the author is very good at writing and is afraid of getting bad grades, so after saying this, I would like to say that his daily writing is indeed quite good.

Yes, it suits my taste, the emotional description is delicate, the protagonist does not lick the dog, and the execution is very strong

The writing is excellent, good luck to the author!