Mythical Card Maker: Start with the Mountain Ghost

Will the author continue writing? Although some small details have not been handled well, there is no particularly clichéd retarded passerby or brainless heroine, nor does it deliberately overwhelm the protagonist. After the college entrance examination, the two blue cards were successfully upgraded to purple cards. The money and trophies that should be earned in the whole process are all available. Although the writing is a bit jerky, the overall flow is smooth, and there is no particularly uncomfortable reading. Good grass level! It is recommended that you write an explanatory chapter when you have time, including the details of the characters, cards, card levels, star numbers, upgrade methods, icons of the cards owned by the protagonist, etc., And put them on top. For example, mental power and spiritual power correspond to meditation and breathing methods respectively. The protagonist's current panel can also be updated in this chapter.

In fact, this type of subject matter has great potential, but why should it be stereotyped?

Many book friends have reported that the image of the Shangui card is not consistent, so I tried to make a new one. Let's see how it goes. If you still think it's not good, then I'll upload the card I made with the Three Kingdoms UI.

I hope it's not someone reincarnated. I've been deceived several times. Just hold on and write well. There is still a chance for this subject.

Mainly because of the title Jiu Ge, but I feel that the positioning of card strength and monster strength is a bit vague. Jiu Ge's Chudi mythology system is one of the oldest and complete mythology systems in China, but the cards do not have any special performance. The mountain ghost and the door god behind it, I don't see anything special about it compared with ordinary purple quality monsters. As the oldest god that has been around for thousands of years, apart from the skill description and special effects, there is nothing outstanding about it. This is the most unacceptable thing to me.

The settings are very vague, and many things like quality are not clearly stated. There is also a card-making slot that appears suddenly with no explanation. Just as I said before, no more cards can be made when the card-making slot is full. Later, I opened a store and continued to make cards for sale. You didn't write clearly how many card-making slots each level has, and you didn't say what the restrictions were. As for the breathing method, it was mentioned as basic breathing method at the beginning, but later when I went to play a dungeon, it was said that the academy taught Canglan breathing method, and it was mentioned as basic breathing method later on in practice. The setting of this book is vague, and there are many plot inconsistencies.

I feel like your cards might as well focus on writing the Chu type and linking them up first. It's so messy to create several types of cards directly.

After seeing the secret realm, I didn't see it. I didn't understand why I needed to form a team. The team members didn't show any help to me.

The biggest problem with card novels is the campus competition, and most of their ultimate moves are only a few hundred copies, and the campus competition is over. Why? Because I can't write, what should I do after graduation? . As a card world, there are countless small worlds and dungeons. As a normal empire, it would naturally send troops into the small world and expand its territory into the deeper world. This is the idea that a complete empire should have. I really can't hold in a lot of words for a campus story.

The time-travel setting only needs to let readers know that the protagonist has traveled through time. Don't always emphasize the original owner again and again. Are you afraid that readers will forget?

Why did you join the Public Security Bureau again? I'm speechless.

Update once a day? A little scared

Subsequent cards will be sent here.

This book feels okay, the plot is quite compact, and it feels clearly written. At least there are no loopholes so far, and there are no pretense tricks. The plot progresses layer by layer. It's okay, worth reading, and worth following.

The biggest problem with card-making novels is that the protagonist's cards are inexplicably strong and have no source of power. I don't know if this problem has this problem. It would be better to set the mythical world as real and the card's power comes from the gods and demons in the mythical world.

Father-in-law, it's time for you to go out and buy something!

I read it on QQ and I really can't help but comment. I read the first few chapters and it's a good foundation, but the author really doesn't know how to write. There are too many poisonous points! Is the protagonist willing to inherit this identity? If you are unwilling to inherit this identity and only regard this body as a stolen skin, then do not inherit the original social relationships, do not have feelings for other people's friends, other people's relatives, sell it when you need to, and maximize your profits! If you are willing to inherit this identity, don't want the original owner's predecessor. It's disgusting. I repeatedly emphasize that this is not my body. Since you have traveled through time in this body and are willing to admit this identity, it is only you and no one else! I am alone! Just like your arm, the material comes from the universe and the gestation comes from your parents, but it is a part of you. When you are willing to admit this identity and this body, then it becomes part of "me", even if the previous resident himself comes, you can still say this. The confusion about self-boundaries is really uncomfortable to watch!

Hahahahahahaha, the cover has overdrawn the credit of the card flow novel to 3640 AD.

Very well written, keep up the good work. The monthly recommendation vote has been voted 👍👍👍