The World-Renowned Boxing Sage Started by Teaching Confucius

After reading ten chapters, the old plot again depresses the protagonist and makes people hate it. At the beginning, the protagonist has no qualifications and is useless. The plot is like a repeated pump, which makes newcomers angry and old readers disgusted. Goldfinger is really poisonous to the extreme. All day long, I think about getting something for nothing, which is disgusting. This kind of idiot dream, without any wisdom or writing skills, constantly suppressing the plot like a running account, is an obvious cultural poison for readers with some brains.

One thing to say, the reason for the contradiction is too blunt.

I can't stand it anymore. It's too pretentious. It's hard to survive and still talk about the world. Whether you are a dog or a male, there is a process of growth. What do you want to do most when you are transported to a strange world? There are also problems with the plot setting: as a father, when giving birth to a child, he also thinks that if the family is prosperous, he will not kill the second child at every turn; there is also a problem with the world setting, how can the common people not know about the existence of a demon? Are you kidding me? The village chief farts very loudly, and the whole village will know about it all morning. I suggest you rewrite it

I have been short of books for a long time and finally found a novel that suits my taste 😢

Accept critical comments and opinions so that I can know where I wrote poorly, but please don't attack me personally T^T

The introduction is interesting, let me take a look

Wait, this set of cheats is very familiar. Have you ever written Benjidao's Urban High Martial Arts before? That book was very good at pretending, but it's a pity that the results were a bit low. I cut it.