
Three Kingdoms: Liu Bei's Mediocre Counselor
三国:刘备的庸才谋士
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- 104k Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
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No, man
It is really mediocre to travel so early and still have the ups and downs of Xuzhou and the danger of Changban.
It's a pity that it's a common problem for newbies to give the wrong details. I don't write carefully where I should be detailed, and I omit the places that shouldn't be omitted. The more I read, the more boring I become. I hope your next book will be better. See you then.
If the protagonist doesn't know about the Three Kingdoms, I think your setting is reasonable But you have to know that it's difficult to write a character who doesn't know the plot of the Three Kingdoms. I made a mistake when I first started, the farm issue, which directly caused a conflict. If you are not good enough, don't write about the protagonist and don't know the plot.
How should I put it? The protagonist's abilities are unknown, Liu Bei has a low IQ, and Zhang Fei is too gentle. No matter how Liu Bei is, he has also led soldiers and served as an official. When asking the protagonist for advice, it is not an exaggeration to directly quote what the protagonist says. However, Liu Bei thinks he is talented and Zhang Fei thinks he is awesome. Do you really not know whether this answer is awesome or not? The mediocre person in the title of the book must be a modern mediocre person, not a pure mediocre person. What is a modern mediocre person? I have no practical experience and no foresight, but I have a lot of reading. No matter whether it is useful or not, I have to make a formula first, and there are multiple sets of formulas, ancient, modern, and modern. I don't care whether it can be solved or not, just apply it and discuss it with others. The protagonist has the formula, Liu Bei and Jian Yong have experience, won't this plot come out? It's better than writing a sentence where the protagonist is dealing with official business, but can't even show what official business he is doing. , And this is also an upgrade, from having no experience to learning and communicating bit by bit, and being able to make full use of the knowledge in your head.
I have changed the outline and the future content will definitely be better than now!
Two years after Liu Bei entered Xuzhou, where was Yuan Shu?
To write history, study the history first. Ten carts of food are enough to feed three thousand people for how many days? One person weighs one pound a day, which is three thousand pounds a day. How much food can be in a cart? How far is the road from Pingyuan to Xuzhou and how long does it take? Qingzhou is Gongsun Zan's territory. How can three thousand people pass through?
Well, after reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Liu Bei is really not that useless.
You can write however you want, come up with your own way of writing, and if you make a mistake, just open the next book.
Have you read the author's book? Doesn't the protagonist go to junior high school or high school? ? ? Even if you don't understand, you should know a little bit about it! ?
Let's see if there is any hope that Yuan Shao can live a few more years, otherwise the Yuan family will fight internally, and Cao Cao will still get an advantage.
If you miss Lu Bu, you'll be in trouble with Chongzhou.
Lu Bu, Chen Gong, and Zhang Miao didn't write about the rebellion, and then they robbed Liu Bei of Xuzhou.