Just Reborn as a Green Plum, the Scumbag System Is Coming

There are spoilers, so read with caution. To be honest, the previous writing is quite average, even a bit bad. When Xiao Su started fishing, the image of a child with adult thinking was very average, and the rhythm and plot were also very average. The little penguin reminded me of Cuckoo Gaga's Penguin, but it was a little different. The really interesting part was the Xu Xia Yuan chapter, where the little adults were portrayed very well. The image of children like Xiao Xu was also well portrayed, the rhythm was good, and he was above average. The scene when Xiao Xu comes back is considered a small climax. Add some description of the environment to exaggerate it, and then foreshadow the mood of the male protagonist earlier. I feel that the climax can be higher. Secondly, in the Xiao Su chapter, the fishing plot mentioned that Xiao Su's father is the boss of the male protagonist's father and has an important project that can lead to promotion and salary increase. However, it was not mentioned later, and the author took advantage of it. If he mentioned it in the house plot, he should be able to change the house to a house with better initial configuration. Also, after cutting off the heroine, the plot of the previous heroine was completely gone. I don't know if it was intentional or accidental. In short, if I give you more updates, the donkeys in the production team will not dare to rest like this!