The Great Rebels in the Late Ming Dynasty

Give the author some advice on how to write the best beginning. Please refer to the July new work of the author who died young. After reading the three golden chapters at the beginning, I have no desire to read on. There are too many elements in the beginning.

Seize the opportunity and change from darkness to light?

You don't climb the technology tree at all. In the environment at that time, the Manchu and Qing Dynasties had the strongest combat power. In the situation you wrote, how many days of training can you beat the Qing Dynasty? How many pages are you writing now? Technology tree, you are climbing the technology tree, the whole generation difference. Reading your book, I see that it's not exciting at all now, it's just mediocre. To relieve boredom when you have nothing to do. I can only accompany you so far

When you first know that troubled times are coming, you should consider preparing for rebellion. If you can have a stable life, you can also consider adapting to the environment without rebelling. If troubled times are coming and you cannot live a stable life, you should consider how to prepare for rebellion. If you have money, use money to win over people's hearts. If you don't have money, use small favors and words to win over people's hearts. And you should choose the poorest, upright, upright, and grateful people. It is best that none of them can survive. If you can lurk in the early stage, lurk. If you can't hide in the rolling mountains, it's best to have water sources and open up wasteland. The government won't try hard to catch small thieves. In the mountains, you can find people who can't survive or directly arrest people to farm. Those who don't have any land for farming will become bandits. If the big households in the market towns can't rob them, they will rob the village. Households, rob various craftsmen, make ordnance, if you have money, choose people who are afraid of death but are smart to help buy various things that you don't have but need, and buy sulfur and saltpeter to make gunpowder, and at the same time find ways to increase productivity, etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., When you know that troubled times are coming or are already in troubled times, you should consider and find ways to prepare.

The title of the book is: It is better to betray one's sight, to lose one's sight, or to be blind than to become blind.

In fact, you write history very well, but it is too slow to enter the main plot. In the last book, I skipped it and started reading it directly from the protagonist Jing Nan. You can tell yourself how many words are missing. The previous book was cut into 2 million words. Your grades may be half as good, I hope this won't be the case

The great rebel is good-looking, I just like the kind of people who rebel directly! It looks great. If you don't like dog licking, lick it clearly and lick Dashun. If you lick it clearly, you can pull a team and do it by yourself.

So the protagonist is not the dominant one? ?

Work hard💪Come on👏To conquer the world, you have to fight to be happy

See Chapter 194. What was that you wrote about? Grinding and chirping. Parents often write about this little rebel, and then write about that little rebel's intrigues. The plot doesn't advance at all. Open your mouth and shut up. How come your old camp has one top of three and one top of four? Under the circumstances at that time, if you didn't have a technology tree, and if you didn't integrate the technology tree, you wouldn't be able to defeat it, and you wouldn't be able to defeat anyone. Does it work when you travel through time? Your time travel depends on your vision. The technology tree is crushed. Who can you beat if you don't have a technology tree to crush you? Let me ask you. I can only read your book until now and stay with you until now. Goodbye. 2026. July 21st.

It can only be said that the author made the mistake of being too irritated again and didn't see anything interesting. You either start to advance the rebellion quickly, or you just skip some unnecessary grinding. The pace is slow and the protagonist's performance is average. You might as well just write the beginning of the refugee rebellion. This is the disadvantage of the previous book. This one is coming again. The previous one was at least a clan start, but this one can only be said that the author likes to generate electricity for love.

Come on👏work hard💪 and write ✍️two more chapters⋯⋯Always fight🎯

Six more pictures, come on👏

There is no halo of the protagonist at the beginning. He is as helpless, incompetent and speechless as the lower class people in ancient times. It is hard to believe that the boss has traveled through time...