The Heartthrob's Journey Begins with Attribute Points

I posted earlier that I wanted to write a book that is not frustrating, so I will summarize my reading experience first. The following points are sorted by personal subjective preference: 1. [The protagonist's character is not likeable] Before there was a system, he was just a loser, unable to even do such a small thing as rejecting others. After possessing the system, he was pushed away, lacking subjective motivation and a deep understanding of interpersonal relationships. (If the protagonist is set as a freshman and has too little experience, it may be more suitable for the writing of the novel) 2. [No clear career line] So far, the protagonist has been promoted from the most ordinary employee to a middle-level workplace. In theory, he needs to fill in the career content, but most of the writing I have seen is describing the emotions between multiple female protagonists. It's not that having multiple female protagonists is bad, it's just that the development is too fast and too chaotic. It's difficult for readers to form a clear impression of the characters. It's also easy for the author to forget the characters/not arrange the plot after the writing is long. (If it is the kind of story with multiple female protagonists, I think it can be written more white. For example, the trivial details about work at the beginning can be replaced with something else, which can anchor readers more effectively) 3. [The structure needs to be optimized] The protagonist has added good looks. What is the purpose? The title of the book refers to the two words [Male God]. The reason why a man is admired has both internal and external factors. Since his appearance is added, he should be "seen" by others. Just a few female protagonists talking about the male boss, which underestimates the role of appearance. (Referring to someone who was discovered by a talent scout and subscribed to the chapter. I didn't read the chapter, but I saw several times that the heroine used the same sentence pattern to praise the protagonist's handsomeness. This will cause reading fatigue and make it easy to abandon the book) The above content does not criticize the author's conception. Everyone thinks from a different perspective. I express my feelings from the perspective of a reader. Finally, I also wrote a novel The plot, characters, and entry points are different, and the audience is likely to be different. If you are interested, you can read it here

I don't have any strong skills, and I don't have any customer connections. So I would quit my job and start a business when my brain gets hot, and I would drive the male protagonist's car and use the male protagonist's money to start a business? In reality, this male protagonist has been transferred to this woman and ran away. I don't understand how this kind of plot was written.

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel like there is no need to accept Shen Qingyue, right? Their family is also a man of God. Logically speaking, given their status, the Shen family shouldn't be so stupid, right? Did her father sacrifice her marriage in order to consolidate his family status? An only child? Find someone with the same or better status, recruit people into the company, and parachute into the management. Isn't this preparing to package up the company's daughter and give it away? Of course, this is the character set by the author, but it's okay if I feel that there is no need to have a relationship. What's more, it feels like the protagonist will be asked to wipe the butt of their company later. It's too cliche and not as interesting as her best friend Cai Yanyan. Anyway, the protagonist does not lack such a woman, right? What do you think? Author? Are there any readers passing by? What do you think? 🙂🙂

I wanted to laugh when I saw that the system added emotional intelligence to the protagonist, and then the protagonist still looked passive. There is no aggressiveness of male hormones at all. According to my understanding, emotional intelligence means that you have experienced many things in society and you slowly improve. You have no life experience, so the system added it directly.

Why do you feel like the protagonist is so unlikable? Ordinary mediocrity. Can this support the male protagonist of a novel?

Leading people to trade stocks is a poisonous point in urban literature. It is extremely poisonous. I dare to write this. For the sake of a female supporting character, writing this kind of poisonous point to advance the plot is a small gain.

Thank you all!

The emotional intelligence is set too high, you are not a good match for the protagonist at all.

Can't I have some snacks when writing novels? They all use the name Chen Mo. When I see this name, I don't bother to read it. It's like naming a child with the last name Zhang Zhang Wei. Can I be more careful?

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