The School Beauty Is Reborn, and I Become a God with a Golden Finger!

The plot is well written now, but I am a little worried about the future and how to write it well. After all, with the latest plot development, it is still a bit difficult to write it well. Anyway, what I have seen is basically repeating the matryoshka dolls. If you can't write emotional scenes, don't focus on describing them. If you can write, write more about the relationship between the protagonist and Jiang Nannan and the love and hatred of the protagonist they gave birth to. If you write well, I will give you a monthly ticket.

After experiencing life and death, he told the protagonist that there was danger in the box, but he still opened it out of curiosity and almost suffocated himself to death. A person who has fought on the front lines with World of Warcraft can't control his curiosity I can be reborn, and I also create a parallel world, look for trouble, and put tomatoes on the roadside, which is a 6-point bad book

It's a heaven-defying novel. The setting is that the world of the male protagonist is controlled and observed just like Truman. There is a so-called male protagonist setting, but if the strength is high, it can still be pushed aside. The male protagonist is righteous, and it is obvious that he can inherit the strength by turning back. He should have practiced crazily the moment he knew the truth, but the male protagonist did not. The author made it clear that there is only one female protagonist. The male protagonist still found a woman, got that woman pregnant, and made the woman think that he was with her. The male protagonist's son is actually someone else's parasite. Just because the woman and the male protagonist's son are the male protagonist, the woman really thought that she was pregnant with the male protagonist's child. The male protagonist and the woman's father knew about this. The male protagonist was so righteous that if he were me, I would never look back. He took the child away later to let her know the truth, which almost caused the woman to collapse. The male protagonist was also abstract.

The beginning is okay. The Goldfinger design is not very new, but it has absorbed the successful experience of its peers and is well integrated with the plot. After being reborn three times and entering the academy, the standard has dropped a bit. Although the mechanism of raising gu in the academy is unreasonable, it is still acceptable in Xiaobai's novel. But raising Gu to compete for resources → the protagonist stacking points and pretending to be cool is too repetitive. I know that the author wants to use the contradiction between the lack of resources in "Xuanwu College/Four Xiang College" to replace the heroine to promote the plot, but this will increase the proportion of "raising Gu to compete for resources" without limit. Students in the college raise Gu, schools and colleges raise Gu to compete for resources, and schools also raise Gu to compete for resources. This makes the plot structure seem a bit monotonous. Even if the Xiaobai text allows repeated show-off mode, it should be packaged from different angles. Different levels of forces should have different competition models, and they should not always rely on students to fight to stack points. For example, it is unreasonable for the Logistics College to rely on talented people to compete for resources, because if the college is to be established using the model of competing for resources from the beginning, then "Logistics" should be a separate department and cannot be an independent college. We can't let workers who grow lawns also rely on kicking penalty kicks to compete for the qualifications to grow lawns. If there is no lawn, how can you play football?

A good novel, I came across it while watching videos. But my investment ran out this month. 😭

It's crazy, and it's not well written. Start collecting money so early. Obviously you can go back. You still have to do such an irrational thing.

It's well written. I voted for recommendation. Please add more.

The protagonist is equal to the heroine's 3x3, and it can even be buggy. Wouldn't it be twice as much to be reborn with the whole family's secret treasures?

I think Jiang's incident is okay to play in one life, but if it really spreads to the main plot, I think it's too exaggerated. This is a fantasy novel, not a bloody novel. This is a refreshing novel, not a large-scale family ethics drama.