Fairy, Do You Call This Repaying a Favor?

The author's writing is really nice. It would be better if there is a story about chasing a wife or a husband later 👍

The book is indeed a good book. The heroine's character, the hero's practice, and the character's history are all acceptable. It can be seen that the author has designed them carefully. The current multi-female protagonist area and the immortal cultivation area in Qidian tend to be greasy. They either keep fighting and escalating, or they engage in crazy sex scenes to make the female protagonist loose, and there is no gradual and layered emotional line. The author has written with a certain degree of restraint and dignity, making the male protagonist's emotional drama more charming - now the starting point is used less and less, and the Guan Guan Jicha and so on that I used to read are getting more and more oily. This book is worth killing even if it is a seedling. After all, the female protagonists have appeared and developed to a certain extent. But there are also problems. In terms of emotional drama, the author "avoids the important and takes the easy". His good feelings with his childhood sweetheart and his partner, the witch, are all put into history. After the changes, the male protagonist and their mutual new senses and new heartbeats are not described. The male protagonist is dull and gentle and lacks life-like actions outside of fighting (such as playing, eating, reminiscing about old times, etc., And being dull without fighting). "Favorability" means relying on background stories rather than new plot developments. The new Miss Wen, on the other hand, has pure admiration and adoration. When she looks close to her, she feels a little unworthy of the male protagonist. The same goes for the male protagonist and Ye. The male protagonist's feelings for the current Ye and Ye's dependence on the male protagonist seem mechanical. I really suggest that the author use some old routines, although they are routine but they work: how the male protagonist and Ye are dependent on each other for life and death, the male protagonist's superficial numbness but his innocent heart, the details of cooking and washing in the male protagonist and Ye's life... There can be more life-like and emotional things. Those combat training and supporting roles are really not that important. The part about the male protagonist written by the author, "The sword has found its name, and I am no longer numb" is very touching, but the emotions should also be expressed boldly in the follow-up. ——After all, we are not here to see how a bitter and resentful man lives an ignoble existence, dealing with and embracing his new loves one by one. We still want to see a story about Ruyi cultivating immortality, deepening memories with new and old loves, breaking through obsessions, and finally getting along with a beauty and a Taoist tradition.

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I hope the author will persevere

It's finally on the shelves. To be honest, the long section of memories before it was put on the shelves made me a little dizzy.

It's very different from the harem invincible style I imagined.

Some plots and emotional turns are too blunt and forced. It would be better to temper them a little more.

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I hope I can keep writing

It's well written, good luck to the author. It's much more comfortable to watch than the recent greasy and colorful articles with multiple female protagonists 🌹🌹

The kind of cliche from the light novel channel, with a gentle, considerate and considerate male protagonist? Romance drama Qingwen?

But I personally think the plot is a bit long-winded. It's understandable to write about the main character's memories, but there's no need to write too much about the supporting character (Gu Hanfeng)'s past. But keep working hard😳 Just don't stop updating😭

I took a look at the table of contents and found out why the following chapters don't have titles.

Come on, author😡