You Call Here Comes Death a Safety Education Film?

Well written, please update more often. The relationship between the characters is too complicated. Personally, I prefer to watch the career line. All the emotions are involved, which is not enough.

You can still see it, but there are so few people!

The plot is okay, but the relationship between the characters is a bit complicated. I hope the author can clarify it. Overall, it's pretty good.

The plot is too short and the characters are too closely related. The book is good.

The pace is tight and the material selection is pretty good. However, the character relationships are somewhat complicated and direct, and the insertion of character relationships is rather blunt, and the relationship between men and women is very frivolous, which may lead to insufficient character portrayal. If we increase the characterization and promotion of the plot of the selection, establish a more complete growth mechanism for the protagonist, and center the content around the content of the selection to enrich the creative background, the readability will be stronger. At the same time, in terms of character relationships, especially the relationship between men and women and the rough top-down strife, it is not easy to write, so it is better to hide it. Hold on, the above only represents my personal views, thank you for the author👏

A new article by a newbie is online, please collect it and read it ~ Every support from you is the motivation for me to write. Thank you guys for your support! (◍＞◡＜◍) (Because it is my first time to write a book, I found that I am easily affected by comments, so I set a limit. I am really sorry. Please forgive me, thank you)

Because the newcomer's writing skills are not strong enough, the emotional lines are relatively simple and inexplicably complicated, and may even be a bit abrupt. I apologize here. The original idea was to unfold different scenes through different female characters. Now the scenes have been basically laid out. I will revise this aspect as appropriate in the future, focusing on the career line of the protagonist Anyway, thank you for your feedback and thank you for reading my book. There will definitely be other poorly written parts, so please forgive me. (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑