Gunpowder Plate Armor and the Magical Revolution

Before time travel, the 29-year-old protagonist has been more than ten years after time travel. His thoughts are immature and his logic is incoherent. First of all, the style of your work must be compared with that of Steel and Fire. I won't say that you are any worse than him. I don't necessarily compare you with him, but when you choose this track, you must have psychological expectations. I believe the author must also know it. I will just tell you my feelings after reading this book. If you think it is useful, just listen to it. If you do something wrong or have other ideas, just listen to it. There is a problem with the writing style of the narrative. Looking at the story, I feel that some parts are not clear. The protagonist's life is interspersed with the background of the story, and the background explains one section in the east and the other in the west. It feels a bit broken. But when it comes to writing novels, you will improve sooner or later as long as you write, and your storytelling ability will improve sooner or later Gunpowder plate armor, I didn't see the plate armor. I wore a piece of armor during practice, but I didn't play with it in actual combat. Why haven't I mentioned using plate armor yet? Plate armor that resists magic? , Is there any magically enchanted plate armor? Why does the protagonist practice the Swift Sword? , All weapons must be learned, there is no room for choice, and there is no training for other weapons. Ganghuo uses serious long swords, swift swords and sabers, duel weapons from the aristocratic era. In the firearms era, the military also loved to use them, but if you wear plate armor and have close combat, you must bring other close combat weapons. There is a bit of a fight between the left and right brains in the setting. Sometimes I am talking about plate armor, and sometimes I am using a swift sword. There are also muskets and magic in the world. A million gold fuse can make a person wearing plate armor directly boiled into a lobster. There is a system of healing magic. In the case of education, I have not seen other medical technologies, disinfection, hemostasis, and drug treatment. If you ask the protagonist to make two tourniquets, it will be useful for the development of the medical system in another world. The result is a bandage, and then directly use fire to stop the bleeding. So why do you need magic? . You write necromancy spells to eliminate bacteria and viruses. I think the magic has an effect. The magic you are writing now is to give the protagonist a microscope on the actual battlefield. It is equivalent to that, without touching it with his hands, he can see various organ damage in the injured person's body. However, you don't write about detailed methods of stopping bleeding with bare hands. In the environment inside the cabin of a sea voyage, marine Vibrio vulnificus bacterial infection is very serious. In reality, all the surviving bacteria are the best among them. From fever, infection, ulceration, to direct amputation, it is possible at any time. Since the musket was probably a military academy student, it was normal for him not to bring it with him when the port exploded, which is understandable. The army concentrated on moving the merchant ships without weapons, and the condenser was nowhere to be found. In the event of a battle, it was temporarily taken from the merchant ship. Systematic teaching, what kind of spells do you teach in the military academy? What are the specific spells and their categories? Nothing is said about the materials used to cast spells, nor is there any information about what spells are encountered or what countermeasures are available. Is there any systematic magic teaching? What kind of drama can I learn and what spells are there? , Apart from Andrew's old spell casting, he has never seen others use spells. In the first battle, the protagonist tried to entangle the opponent with his mind or some kind of spiritual magic. He was attacked by the opponent and said that he could not be released and beaten. Then what did Monet use to throw dice at others? . After practicing spells with the protagonist, the two sides began to cast spells to grab them again, weren't they also using the so-called phantom limbs or divine songs? , Then what's the difference between throwing dice with your hands and hitting people with your phantom limb holding the dice, and hitting people directly with your phantom limb? Let's not talk about the merchant ships carrying so many over-staffed cold weapons. When your army officer is transferred, the weapons and equipment issued to the protagonist after graduation are very detailed. How much stuff can the protagonist take with him when he graduates? I remember there was a statement written saying that you can bring weapons, but it disappeared after getting on the ship. Knowing that there are pirates on the sea, security issues all depend on the last resort. Except for magic, the performance is the technological level of the musket era. There is no mention of lines and specific military tactics. There are military personnel on the protagonist's ship, and they are all still wearing uniforms. Even if you join the gang on the first ship and kill all the pirates, what is the second pirate ship doing? , The protagonists were able to interrogate from the time they boarded the ship to the time they finished killing everyone, while the second pirate ship just stood there and watched. Two pirate ships, the one operating at the same time, the boss, can be persuaded to surrender when the other ship is kidnapped. The other ship does not know that it has all the weapons and equipment in its hands. From the time the first ship picked up the station to the end of the battle, the interrogation was completed, but the second ship has not arrived yet. Do you have a telescope? Can you see that there are military people on board jumping gangs? Either turn around and leave, or rush up and fire to kill the enemy. As for the section of the Pirate Code, which section talks about pirates returning justice and order on board the ship, did you, the author, laugh when you wrote this section? . What is a pirate? Pirates are just a mob. When there are ordinary merchant ships, they go up to rob them. When there are no ordinary merchant ships, they are merchant ships. They simply fly black flags. They do nothing but rob and bully the weak and fear the strong. What happens on a ship at sea? , Terrible things will happen, there is only one rule on the ship, what the boss says and his core gang. If you look at the fishing boats that went out to sea more than ten years ago, it was the boss of the boat who had the final say. A fishing boat at sea was an isolated island floating in the sea. Without laws and rules, terrible things would happen. Search Lu Rong 2682 for yourself. The so-called Pirate Code, you can only use it as a guide. In fact, the boss leads his core group to ensure the suppression of other accomplices, and whatever they say will be ignored. The rest is a compromise to the interests and life needs of other members. Barbarism, absurdity, and bloodthirsty are the background of this gang. After grabbing it and dividing the money, I got off the boat somewhere and either became a fisherman again or went to work as a sailor on another ship. At that time, the household registration and identity were meaningless. When traveling, the identity was given by oneself. After a certain robbery on the ship, the pirates on the ship disbanded directly. Except for the fixed core team, the others were floating people. The purpose of uploading was to do this job. To sum up, you said that there is systematic teaching, but you have not seen where the system is, what the spell system is specifically like, and you have not made it clear at all what the war model of this era is like. You have also not made it clear that in the age of firearms, muskets and artillery bombardment, what is the meaning of plate armor? Still didn't make it clear. If you talk about plate armor, it has a meaning, it is something in the title of the novel, then why does the protagonist still wear armor for training in the military academy. To be honest, I didn't mean to disparage the author, and I didn't mean to find fault with it. The most basic thing is that I feel uncomfortable when I look at it. I see something wrong with this, and I want to speak out. How to advance the storyline? I don't care about you, but what is the basic war system of your story background? , The age of firearms, war is combined with magic, and how to fight with armor. This is the name of your novel. You have to explain it to me clearly. What can be seen is the plate armor, but what is its use if I don't see it? The protagonist is not allowed to use the musket. What exactly can magic do? How is it useful? What does magic look like? Didn't make it clear.

The strength of your mage is so high, even stronger than that of Steel and Gunpowder. One mage can cause a lot of casualties. How did you spend the early stage? How many times have mages come to your rear to cause damage, and you can still fight? There are fewer soldiers drafted than dead. How can we fight on this front? Can you please explain the restrictions on magicians in the first chapter? High demons, mortals beat the magicians with their heads. Can black powder break your wizard father's magic shield? 😏 The restrictions on magicians in the Steel Fire Demon book just promoted the development of physical technology. According to the magic strength of your book, how can you, a commoner, fight against the master who has developed mass destruction spells for hundreds of years?

This book is too similar to The Law of Steel and Fire. They were both written from the last year of military school. Both stories involve an explosion at a military port on the eve of graduation. Then the protagonist takes a merchant ship back home and encounters pirates. The senior officers in his army are all his relatives. One is his uncle, and the other is simply his father! The background of the magical world is also a matter of research and judgment on technology! But, no matter what, please don't suck. As for the magic system that many people criticize... I am a very patient person, I hope you will see it in the article later! Systematic sorting out.

Why is it exactly the same as the steel fire method?

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How should I put it? Now that I see it, I feel like it is tasteless and a pity to throw away. Although the protagonist fits the character of a college student, he is simply a bit silly and cute. To put it bluntly, the first thirty or so chapters are just pure campus life. You can change the background template to any other and it will not be inconsistent. It is the outer courtyard of Cultivation Academy, a passionate and fantasy academy. The introduction says that the protagonist will also be the one to push the wave, but to be honest, it has been a typical academy adventure so far, and it is difficult for me to see the protagonist having such characteristics. Maybe the author may want to write a long-term protagonist, but the current protagonists are like the protagonists in hot-blooded comics. Unless the author is a deus ex machina, I think it will be difficult to become the kind of person who leads the trend of the times.

It's okay, but I hope the author can write his own stuff, and the plot will probably follow the same direction.

This month's monthly passes are gone. I'll give them back when they become available in a few days.

There are too few updates. Please update more. There are plots to draw lessons from. Just make it faster.

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Thanks to readers for their great feedback, we have corrected the shortcomings of reading books that were confusing due to too strange dividing lines 😍😍😍

After catching up on the latest chapter, the feeling is probably the same. I hope there are some other new things 🙂🙂🙂

Don't update soon, I've given out all the monthly tickets, and the rest will have to wait until the middle of the month

I will recommend it tomorrow, there will be more updates 🙂

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As for the protagonist's forgiveness of Kurt's hatred, how can I say this? Only those who stand above can do this, and the protagonist's identity is just right. What the protagonist does is of great zz significance. At a small level, it means that some members of the army have accepted Kurt. At a larger level, it means that the republic where the protagonist is located has begun to accept Kurt and regards him as his younger brother. I don't know what the author's follow-up outline will be like. I suggest adding these influences.

Don't update more during the holidays.

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? ? ? After seeing Chapter 60, not to mention time travel and rebirth, a second-generation person with a relatively high level doesn't understand anything, is he like a fool? ?

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