
Covering the Sky: Starting from the Ancient Forbidden Land
遮天:自荒古禁地开始
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- Ongoing
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- 256k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
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- Qidian
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Another person who wrote blindly without looking at Zhe Tian. Anyone who knows a little bit about Zhe Tian knows that the Overlord Body and the Holy Body are mortal enemies. Their hatred is engraved in their bones and printed in their blood. This sentence is not just talk, but a solid fact. The original book states that as soon as Ye Fan and Overlord met, the blood of both parties wanted to fight each other to the death. How could the two parties get married and have children?
Anyone who doesn't respect the setting of the original work is Yun. If you don't respect the setting of the original work, then why do you still write fan fiction?
There are so many Zhetian physiques but you chose two that are incompatible. You should also respect the original setting when writing a fanfic.
I feel bad 😐
The author probably has never seen Zhetian. He can write about how he can practice in Shenyuan.
Between the Holy Body and the Overlord Body, one mountain cannot accommodate two tigers, not even one male and one female, unless one party wants to capture the other party and make a star effort.
The Tyrant Body rejects all bloodlines. It does not have the tolerance of the Holy Body. I will delete it and re-open it.
Some opinions and suggestions on the protagonist's physique that is difficult to break down
Author, it is not feasible for you to write about these two physiques. There is a conflict in the blood of the holy body and the hegemonic body, and the hegemonic body cannot be integrated with other constitutions. If you want to write about this kind of physique, you can completely design a physique that has both the nine divine forms and the nine visions. The physical body is far superior to the ancient holy body. Or you can write a physique with a hegemonic body superimposed on double pupils or a hegemonic body superimposed on supreme bones. After all, supreme bones and double pupils are considered to be the fusion of organs and hegemonic bodies and do not conflict. After all, these two types of concepts have been mentioned before, and there are almost no such books on the market.
I haven't read it yet, but 90% of the comments are written by IA
Summon Shennong
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If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write randomly.
It seems that there are two main problems. First of all, the Holy Hegemon body is nothing. It is regarded as a system or mutation cheat. Looking at the specialness of time travellers, it is mainly due to some inconsistencies in the settings.
The legendary holy hegemonic body? Can it rival the existence of Chaos Body?
What should the Holy Body and the Ba Body be called? Holy body? Tyrant Holy Body?
Although the setting of the Holy Tyrant Body does not conform to the original work, it is understandable since it is a plug-in created by the author. It's just that the setting of your domineering god form is too poisonous.
Let the author enjoy some snacks
If you ask AI to change it, why don't you review it? The ai prompt words have been added. I have no objection to your use of ai.