Jingxiang Longqian: from Common People to the World

Let me put it more emphatically here. If you want to slowly write a million words, someone will definitely read it. But you have to survive it first. There are millions of words. If you update 8,000 words every day, you will have to write continuously for half a year. It still requires a lot of time and effort. Unless you have a mine at home and write this for fun, it doesn't matter at all. If your time and energy are limited, you must control it. If it is a regular daily update, 4,000 words. It does not consume much energy, but it consumes a lot of mental energy. And it requires constant perseverance, and the energy consumption here is not large, which is still compared to 8,000 words. The so-called third form is both for artistic expression and for making money. The suggestions I give are suggestions to achieve the third form. Because if you want to make money, whether it is purely to make money, or you want to express yourself and make money at the same time. Then you won't make any money writing like this. You can only satisfy the expression. It doesn't matter at all what you think. What the author did only allowed me to see the possibility of expressing this. But if you are purely engaged in art and expression, what are you doing online? Just think you have to do it here. Isn't your time and energy time and energy? Can't you do more? Can't you do more things to achieve your goals? I am not obligated to read all of your current chapters before evaluating. I can read three chapters and give suggestions for modification, which already consumes my energy. The current level does not allow me to catch up to the latest chapter and then comment critically. But I still have to emphasize it. I'm not here to purely vent my emotions, I'm here to tell you how to change it. It doesn't matter if you don't listen. If you want to refute, of course you can refute me below this comment. If you want to persist, then please persist. It's best to slap me in the face after the results are released. Good luck, author.

Author, are you not updating? It is normal for the contract to fail now. Please adjust the beginning and try again. Or simply. After deleting this book from the starting point. No contract signed anyway. Just delete it and publish it on other platforms. Don't give up on the story in your heart. Come on

The author is indeed thoughtful, there is no doubt about it. But what was shown truly told me that this is a niche work. I am not the audience. I want to ask the author a question here. "Are you writing to make money, or are you writing for fun." If you are writing to make money, I suggest you leave it. If you write it for fun, it doesn't matter if you don't make a dime. That's optional. I have read a lot of books, especially on platforms like Qidian. Not to mention anything else, the author didn't even grasp the three golden chapters. What modern people want to read is not just the three golden chapters, but the three golden sentences. The content of the three chapters is as bland as water, and it should be emotional. The content that allows people to be convinced and fully understand the protagonist's personal charm is actually conveyed in a few simple descriptions. And the author's statement is actually at the end of the chapter. Not many people have the leisure to read this controversial content and endure it until the end of your chapter. The most I can endure is the next page. Since you want to show your prophetic vision, write it in the book instead of having the author say it at the end of the chapter. It's not that the author's plot goes by very slowly. On the contrary, it passed too quickly. After reading three chapters, my feeling is that there is no emotion. I don't know what Zhou Yu went through during this time period, so he had such emotions towards the protagonist's behavior. I don't know anything, I'm just watching. I don't know what Zhao Yun went through at this time, the same as Zhou Yu. Sure up the local brave and win the hearts of the people, take in Zhao Yun, take in Zhou Yu. None of them gave me the so-called pleasure, and even the mood swings were difficult. Even the first few paragraphs of the first chapter made me want to complain. The first few paragraphs are so important and the timing is so important. You actually spend a lot of pen and ink describing the appearance of this old slave? Oh my God, you didn't even spend any pen and ink on writing the pleasant parts that won people's hearts. Are you willing to spend time on this? The first chapter is like this, I thought it was just the author who wanted to start quickly. So a lot of content has been simplified. The result is still the same in Chapters 2 and 3. I wouldn't say you're an assembly line person, but there are a lot of emotional points that should be included in the content, but you just brushed them all off. It's not like you are such a quickie. I am not here to dissuade the author from his creative mentality, but to tell the author. How can you increase your traffic without destroying your original content? The golden content of the three chapters is already very slow, and you haven't caught it yet. Give the author some clear advice. What matters now is emotion, then logic. There is no big problem with the author's logic. But you don't even have the most basic emotions to seduce people. At least you put the explanation up front, so that the person explaining it changes from the author to the protagonist. And it is not a brief explanation, but an explanation that people can clearly understand. For example, the process of conquering Zhao Yun. You first explain Zhao Yun's current background, and then give Zhao Yun more psychological description. For example, the protagonist's reputation has been passed down for a long time, and Zhao Yun has already known the protagonist. At first I thought he was just a straw bag, but after seeing him, he actually lived up to his name. Can your simple sincerity in the book really be used as an explanation to impress readers? What the author wants is definitely for more people to discuss it. Whether or not you make money may be secondary to the author. This is evident from the author's creative attitude. I can't see where the author told me that he wanted to make money. I didn't hear anyone tell me that I wanted traffic. I only see that you want to create a niche circle. I only hope that there will be dozens or even a few people to read your book. In the end, you no longer have the energy to write, so you cut the book.