Begin Martial Arts as an Undertaker and Become a God

Unconsciously, it has been almost a month since I published the book. Ma Dan is here to thank everyone for your recognition, companionship and support. Then tell me something about this book. This book tends to be a slow-burn fantasy. The protagonist's combat power is low in the early stage. Coupled with the background setting of the Yun Dynasty, it is destined that the protagonist will find it difficult to participate in the battle in the current environment. Therefore, Ma Dan also deliberately downplays the advanced description of combat power to avoid the embarrassing scene of getting stronger without fighting to prove it. The early stage of this book focuses on foreshadowing and growth, and is not a traditional royal novel. Please read it at your own discretion. Thank you for your understanding. Then let's talk about some personal requests. Ma Dan hopes that readers who don't like this book will be lenient. You can say that the book is plagiarized, uses AI, or directly criticizes the plot, or Ma Dan himself is too mentally retarded. It doesn't matter, because Ma Dan is still a newcomer and is growing up. Finally, thank you all for seeing this, Ma Dan is very grateful.

Ma Dan, I think your writing is very good, keep up the good work!

After looking at it for a long time, I realized that it was due to luck. It was really unlucky.

After reading Chapter 53, I can read this book so far~ But why are there so few collections? Kind of buried!

I don't need to hang it up, it's just for fun! Withdrawn

There are too many books with homogeneous plots. After going out to the border to fight, you can basically understand the general meaning by looking at the chapter names, but I can't stop reading 🙂

It's a pity that there are two books before and after it was put on the shelves. It turns out that it is good for the master to deal with the master's affairs, and the low-hand to deal with the low-hand's affairs, but the last section of the border chapter forces the protagonist to participate in the direct confrontation between the master and the master, which is a bit inferior. The Imperial City Chapter has a feeling of sleepwalking, and I write wherever I dream.

The character design of the protagonist is not good, it's just a comparison of candy

Excellent work, not like a novice, I don't know which master laid the egg.

The first 15 chapters were not well written, but the writing got better and better in the following chapters. It's also a bit uncomfortable that a breakthrough in martial arts requires the assistance of medicinal materials.

Simply write about the warrior who will persuade him to quit. After seven years in prison, he should know that there are warriors. Conclusion and introduction are not enough.

Are you going to be a court dog again🐶? Just slip away.

Shennong - The book is good, the first 50 chapters are basic, the writing is smooth, the main and supporting characters are clear, and it is a fate-type book. The disadvantage is that the main line is not clear, there are very few realm upgrades, and the cart is put before the horse. After the 50th chapter, the situation becomes even more confusing. There are many transitional plots, and I go on to investigate the case (it all relies on the support of my colleagues, so I can read this book)

The writing is okay. But the main character is so rubbish. A waste batch. There are no ups and downs. Nothing exciting. The description of the progress of martial arts training or the specific details are not exciting, it is too bland. To be honest, it's a bit like AI.

I feel like, Ma Dan, why don't you stop writing about random fights? It's quite interesting when you write about daily life. When you write about investigating cases and fights, it's like you've lost your mind... Let me put it bluntly, even if you let AI come up with the plot of the fight for you? What are you doing? It's better to have one AI

The pace of this book is really too slow. One reason is that there are a lot of "writing" traces. The other reason is that the author of the story may not have thought it through at all, so the progress is extremely slow. I have read ten chapters. In summary, isn't this the first time the protagonist discovered the body of a warrior, was involved in a murder and was forced to use it as bait? There are too many redundant descriptions in the middle, and there are too many useless plots.

What a masterpiece! A rare good book 👍

How should I put it? So far, I am still studying Goldfinger. The plot is not fast and not draggy. It is okay and can be watched, but it is divided into different parts.

Damn, to be honest, this is really well written. The most interesting thing during this period is that for other martial arts training, I now go to a small martial arts hall. There is a genius junior brother. Later, the genius junior brother is either beaten to death or betrays and goes to the sect. This book has a different feeling. Okay.

Let's heat it up slowly. No one is hot anymore.

The writing is pretty good, and the plot doesn't have any bad points. It just feels like it's getting more and more crooked as it's written, and it becomes more and more like a group portrait novel later on.

The writing is good, and the story can be told in a relatively unoriginal setting. The follow-up mainly depends on the amount of updates.

It was a pleasure to read, come on author!

Just one update a day is too little.

I have a question: Is the body embalmed by the body collector or by makeup?

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