I Am in Douluo, Brother Huo Yuhao

First of all, it is impossible for Tang San to pass on the God of Shura to anyone. As we all know, the character is the author's man in leather, and the author cannot let go of his official position, so it is impossible for Tang San to give up his position as the God of Law Enforcement.

What kind of thing can plane will be to the Yin Shen King? The masters of the planes are only second-level gods. Also, it is impossible for Tang San to pass the divine status to the protagonist, Tang San needs to maintain his full strength. Originally, Tang San planned to pass the Asura God's throne to Huo Yuhao, but he had a premonition of a crisis in the divine world, so he stopped Huo Yuhao's divine examination.

If nothing else, I beg the author to stop thinking about your Oranges. The plot of the previous Orange was too outrageous.

Didn't I say before that Blue Silver Grass was your last Dou Er book? Are you going to rewrite one or three in the future?

Normally, brothers are called by their first name without brother, brother without first name, and di by first name.

It's so confusing, the plot is not clearly explained, there are a lot of messes

I've been writing so awkwardly lately, my writing style isn't very good, and I've written a lot about battles.

This is another bad book. How can I make it start well every time, then become messy in the middle, and then completely suck in the later part?

What's so great about Dou Er's soul guide? Apart from hydrology and delaying progress, it has no effect at all. It can be said that it's starting to go downhill.

Is the protagonist a boy and girl? 🙂

Other Douluo fan novels have either more than 20 chapters or more than 30 chapters and are directly on the shelves. At first glance, you can tell it is a studio article. I feel it is basically related to three. They generally feel that they have signed a contract with a publisher like Qidian. Only the author has 80 chapters, almost 100, and it hasn't been released yet.

Those two books of yours were so ugly, it's strange how well-paced this one has become. Don't say anything, put it on the shelves and order it all

Like I said, there are either bad sentences, not clear reading, or typos. There are also some names and nouns that are repeated or missing a word. For example, there is no platform in Fighting Soul. Isn't it behind the words? Otherwise, it just reacts and repeats.

Can you give that embryo in the snow to Dai Luoli? Otherwise, just a martial soul wouldn't feel like the protagonist.

Bro, please change the title of your book Your name is too abstract

(ꐦÒ‸Ó)You old man

The sauce is here, come on, the author, bring Samyang turkey noodles, gold and silver steamed buns, crispy oven-roasted duck, grilled sausages, pancakes and fruits, a small bench in the front row

The idea is okay, but the writing is not good

I hope the heroine can harvest autumn children, thank you

The writing is very good, why are there so few people?

The right leg bone was fused twice, I hope to change it