Science Fiction Artist

The author's description of the protagonist solving 29 questions in one hour makes people feel that the filter is too deep for some people. Academic masters are also human beings, and they also need to calculate and think. It takes less than an hour to copy the answers. According to the complexity of the steps of the first question, it will take at least more than a minute to copy, let alone solve the problem Let's talk about the identity of the protagonist first (previous life academic master, + more than ten years of experience as a teaching assistant). First of all, judging from the supervision of many years of teaching assistants, at most he is at the level of an ordinary Qingbei student. Since there is no hope for anything further up, we use this as a premise to calculate the protagonist's speed in solving questions (also attached: I don't think that learning the same knowledge for more than ten years will make him much better, for another reason) There are 15 optional questions in the New College Entrance Examination. Qingbei students usually spend between 30 and 40 minutes. Among them, the simple questions only require simple calculations and thinking, which range from 40 seconds to more than 1 minute. The intermediate questions have some calculations, ranging from more than two minutes to more than 3 minutes. The difficult questions have some calculations ranging from more than two minutes to more than 3 minutes. The question time may go up to 5 minutes (and the process is not written), and the proportion in universities is 30%, 50%, and 20% This can barely reach a question of more than two minutes, let alone the difficulty of the finale. If this happens in the optional At least 8 minutes or more, and the nearly 30 questions in the article indicate that the difficulty of the finale of the college entrance examination after 20 years is already mentioned Then let's talk about the role that experience can play in this industry. It has an obvious effect on simple and medium questions, but its effect on difficult questions has become worse, and on the finale questions It's basically useless Let's talk about the reason: the template for simple and medium questions is obvious, and memory plays a big role, but every Qingbei student has experienced many battles. There is no difference in performance between memorizing something for 1 year and memorizing it for 11 years. Not to mention that it may be easier to become a teaching assistant, because as long as he can understand the answers, in most cases he will not do every question by himself. The gap between practical practice and theory is not small for a long time. Besides difficult problems, the role of experience in difficult problems is to provide ideas. For the test direction, at most, a second-level conclusion can be added to simplify the thinking burden. Within the scope of a certain teacher, there is not much difference between 100 additional knowledge and 200 expressiveness. Finally, when it comes to the finale question, I don't know what the author's definition of the finale is, so I will take it first As for the characteristics of the final question of the college entrance examination, the first point is that it is new. It gives you new materials, new background and new knowledge, and then allows you to deduce conclusions. In this case, what is tested is not your experience and your memory, but your thinking. It can be said that it is research, application, and problem solving. Comprehensive thinking on the problem, plus secondary conclusions, association skills, and basic abilities such as calculations. In this case, unless you have learned the derivation of relevant knowledge or done similar problems, then it can be said that no matter who solves the problem, the speed will be slowed down To be honest, people who have experienced the college entrance examination find it outrageous to see such an insulting final question.

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A reminder before reading this review, the following are personal opinions. The setting of the novel is very interesting, the problem-solving process is rigorous, the combat description is wonderful, the plot advancement is reasonable, and the protagonist's combat power is not suppressed. But there are some problems. I mainly saw that the author said it needed to be overhauled, so I posted this long review to express my personal views. First of all, the misalignment of title and content. The title is science. Science itself has a wide scope. Logical science, natural science, and humanities are all sciences. They can even include social practice and engineering practice. Even science in the narrowest sense can be replaced by science. In this case, there are already fifty chapters in the book, and the main plot is all about mathematics. Not to mention practice and humanities, even natural sciences are only mentioned twice in the background. The impression is definitely not much better. There is actually a precedent for the starting point of the natural sciences, and the Arcane God's Throne is; there is also a precedent for the humanities, with Confucianism and Taoism being the sages (although it is mainly literary copying; but excluding poetry, the setting of the Hundred Schools of Sage is good in terms of expressing the humanities, especially the four schools of Confucianism, History, Law and Miscellaneous Studies). There are even more social practices and engineering practices. Most of the novels about dynasty cultivating immortals and science fiction novels have similar descriptions. Secondly, there is a mismatch between the protagonist's scientific research and remuneration. In the research group, the protagonist is the absolute main force in tackling key problems, and nothing can be done without him. In this case, the protagonist's reward for solving a problem is actually only 100, not part of the research team's income. What is the difference between this and using a lollipop to defraud a top scientist of three days of labor? Yes, the protagonist hopes to enter the Holy Court stably, but this is two different things from the protagonist working hard and being a bully. Yes, the subject is not difficult or even simple in the eyes of the protagonist, but it cannot be solved without the protagonist and the supporting characters. The bargaining power is in the hands of the protagonist. If the protagonist just helps the research group not to lose money, and then asks 100 for each question, that's great; but when the research group makes a profit later, the protagonist still asks for 100 for each question, and then gives the answer instantly, is the protagonist a big philanthropist? Especially the second ranked problem, 100 was spent. What the protagonist gets is: 100+ secret inspections turned into wooing. Since it is a difficult problem, there must be a reward, or there must be a special organization to award awards. Otherwise, why would anyone disclose the process of solving the problem? So here comes the question, who will get the reward? There is a high probability that it is the research group, because the problem was solved by the research group, so it cannot be that the research group committed academic plagiarism. If we change the plan, the protagonist first sees the problem and hears that it is a difficult problem, so he says it will take time. Now he only has preliminary ideas and then describes it. Based on the situation of the research group, 100 is definitely obtainable. Later, I complained to the team leader, saying that I wanted to ensure that I entered the Holy Court, and I had no intention of thinking about the problem. Then wouldn't the additional investment come? And due to the long duration of the project, the protagonist has been delayed until entering the Holy Academy, and the time has not ended. As a student of the Holy Academy, can the protagonist's status be more equal to that of the team leader? Then the protagonist does some operations, first posts an article about solving the problem, and then uses the identity of the research team to solve the problem a second time in the maze. The original gains will not be less, and the protagonist will only get more. Even the protagonist can write down the imprecision of the proof in the paper, pointing the finger at the foundation of the field of calculus. In scientific research, pointing out problems is as important as solving them, or even more important. Let the protagonist get what he deserves. This is not a capitalist, but a good deed. This time the protagonist gave up what he deserved, and next time someone will ask the protagonist to continue to give up all the gains and share them selflessly, and next time the protagonist will be asked to pay to solve the problem. Also, there is a misalignment between the selection at the grassroots level and the world view at the top. During the first exam, I talked about the importance of mathematics for a long time, and I could pass directly by relying on mathematics, and I only took one mathematics test. Then the chapters these days say that mathematics is not taken seriously at the top level, and it is getting less and less taken seriously. Even mathematical geniuses have gone to engage in natural science. This will lead to a problem. The protagonist becomes famous as a mathematical genius and then joins the mathematical faction. In the world view of the novel, it will not be taken seriously, and it will not receive key support. In addition, combined with the first point, the protagonist will eventually engage in natural science. Isn't this a betrayal of the faction? Finally, there is a mismatch between collective scientific research and self-preservation. I mentioned earlier the precedent of natural science, the Arcane Throne. In its setting, there is also a process from cherishing brooms to collective scientific research, which is of course in the history of the novel. The final result is that the form of collective scientific research completely overwhelms the form of self-preservation. The description of this part in the article makes me a little confused: say it is in the era of self-preservation, collective education, centralized assessment, and the important form of collective scientific research, the research group, and even the ranking of problems; say it is in the era of collective scientific research, and it always exaggerates the non-disclosure of exclusive scientific research results; say it is in a transitional state, the conflict in the Holy Academy highlighted in the article is the conflict between logical science and natural science. The Arcane Throne has long shown that it is in the form of collective scientific research. The protagonist has seen the journal very early and can even judge the progress of scientific research based on it. But so far in this article, the protagonist does not know the progress of scientific research in the world. He is a student under collective education. He only guesses that it is in the early form of calculus and has not been verified by any research content in cutting-edge fields. The misalignment here is even more strange when combined with the second point: in the era of self-preservation, the protagonist disclosed the solution to the second problem; in the era of collective scientific research, the protagonist solved the problem without publishing a paper. Above. I have written so much without realizing it. Again, these are my personal opinions. I hope the author's works will be better after the overhaul.

Shennong's comment: It has the potential to be similar to "Arcane Throne", but it's not bad.

I wrote the first 17 chapters to take the exam and become extraordinary, but it was a mess. Then I started to rush on the road from chapter 17. The battle process on the road was written for another 17 chapters. I can't even think about what you are going to write after it is published. A fight will take 17 chapters. Oh my God, God.

I thought that learning mathematics had the same world view as the Mathematical Olympiad. I didn't expect it to be about the content of a novel. It was too boring and just made the problem-solving process fantasy.

Machine gun, this fantasy is too loud

Anyway, I will never touch math problems in my life after graduating from college...

Are you reading a book or looking at math problems?

It should be called Mathematical Imagineer. Basically every chapter contains mathematical formulas.

This type of novel is most suitable for using AI to compile monsters.

Not a brother, is Zhang Xuefeng reincarnated? This is

The setting is very interesting, four monthly tickets are given 🙂 Come on

The author is great. The starting point for the new book issue is 4,000 words or more. Author, if you don't meet the word limit, you generally can't. You rarely recommend it. It's definitely not good if you don't update it for seven days and a month. If you do this, you might as well re-write a book based on this setting. After all, I have read a novel about the immortal hero before and it was a masterpiece. The introduction is about ascending to the upper world and becoming 100,000 heavenly soldiers besieging monkeys. The author felt that he was not satisfied with the writing, so he prepared to modify the plot and finally book Liangliang

Most people read online articles for decompression. The proportion of mathematics in your article is too high... Mind you, you can put the mathematical formulas or problem-solving related stuff in the extra chapter, and then just write the name of the mathematical formula in the article. If anyone wants to see the mathematical formulas or problem-solving related stuff, just go and read it in the extra chapter. Just write the title of that extra chapter in the article.

... There is really no need to write anything extraordinary. Just go to the city and copy it from that book. It will be a hundred times better than now. My suggestion is to stop the loss in time and cut it quickly.

What impressed me most about this kind of book was the novel many years ago, in which the protagonist was a submarine captain (probably a tribute to Captain Nemo), and there was a dialogue with Marie Curie, which was probably the sentence "God throws the dice or not." I really had goosebumps all over my body after watching it (on the one hand, it was indeed because I was young), but it was a pity that I became a eunuch later.

Are the three golden chapters awakening my past fears for me?

Personally, I like the mathematics part very much, and it is a bold attempt. However, the story part is too monotonous under the fantasy color, at least it cannot support your use of mathematics It is a pity

Boys and girls look really twisted. Wouldn't it be better to write them as students?

1 Gold = 10 silver, 1 silver = 100 copper. What the hell are you setting? You can't just follow the crowd. The new setting looks weird.