The Stars in My Group Are from the Earth

🙂You are the person who spoke with Dilian, right?

It looks okay so far, but the Little Apple part became popular too quickly and suddenly. No matter how fast it is, you have to give it a day. The other is the golden finger format. I chose the chat group. I hope the protagonist can't ask for it unilaterally, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch. It's too short at the moment and I don't know what kind of situation they think the protagonist is. The senior wearing a vest is still an unknown singer-songwriter Let's wait and see for now. I hope the author will come up with new ideas.

How many days do you want to renovate a rag? Say, say, ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? I don't care if what happened is unreasonable or not. Even if the director's background is not here and he doesn't have any connections to solve the problem, you say it! ! How many days do you plan to stay in the water? ? ? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! You say it! ! ! ! Say! ! ! !

Looking at the work, I feel that the author is both old and new... The writing style is obviously very good and smooth, but there are many small details that are so abrupt that it makes people feel uncomfortable. The writing is obviously very skillful in the online writing routines, but the choice of the plot is the same as the writing style. Like a newcomer who has never stepped into the trap before, he always chooses something that is easy to shock the readers... You said that if you are a literary youth, you will choose some songs that the author likes... But he still chooses Little Apple...? What is the necessity of arranging such a plot? Does it have to be Little Apple? It can't be because the author really likes Little Apple, right? Also placed at the beginning of the full text, the second song? You need to arrange something that can be brainwashed and spread quickly to increase your popularity. You can also choose Phoenix Legend, which has better public opinion and can move towards a higher level, right? If you want to satisfy body dance at the same time, choose Zhou Shen's version of "Dala Benba", although it may be a bit forced, but it will be more acceptable to readers than Little Apple, right? If you want to write something new and don't want to follow the old routines of the same type of online works, of course you can, but it can be down-to-earth but not down-to-earth... It's quite a crowd-pleaser. Wait a minute, is it possible that the author is in the atmosphere and put it at the beginning just to screen readers/shock Σ(°ロ°)

It's so amazing that this book actually mentions the finals scene that would be a big deal in other books.

"The Way You Were" is a pop rock song. Where did the author find the information? Actually classify this song as a ballad? When writing about entertainment, if you don't say that you understand music theory, music, film and television analysis, etc., Why don't you at least check your information?

I think it's okay, how about single digits😨

The lack of people may be because it's a bit bland, there aren't too many pretense scenes, and it's also slow to warm up.

Don't you write that Shao Lingwei to death and keep it for the New Year?

It feels like it was written many years ago. When a song was being broadcast live, the superiors would call the director to hold him accountable. Before the song was finished, the song spread to the outside world, spreading from person to person. Little Apple has just finished singing in the square for 3 hours, and other anchors have started to broadcast live that the old man is studying how to dance 😁😁😁 At least give it time to ferment.

So far, the writing and plot are passable. I just don't have much data, and I'm afraid it will be cut off someday.