Immortal Disaster

Is the latest suspense about to be revived? There are so many new and excellent books

I remember last time I commented on the poor opening chapter of Peacock's White Lord, but I was still in high school at that time, so my suggestions were not very useful for reference. First, let me talk about the highlights of Peacock's first book in my eyes. The first is the strong character of the gods, which is novel and unusually high. Unlike the gods in the traditional sense, they must be labeled as great and upright, and such things as oaths, cannibalism, and indifference to mortals in consciousness. There is also the setting of spirit stones, which is also quite interesting. Compared with traditional immortality novels, the level of force is unusually high. It gave me a feeling of awe, rather than using spirit stones and spending money like traditional immortality novels. Another point is that the author has a lot of imagination. Several large chapters of Tomb of the Strange God are adapted from history. The same is true for the new book. This is also quite interesting. Next, I will give my personal suggestions, which may not be reference. The first is the description of the horror plot. I hope that Peacock's more frightening words will be well-founded and not fabricated out of thin air. For example, if the author describes something that is terrifying and even causes fluctuations in the real world, I think this should be more logical, that is, the reason for the horror can be seen, or the subsequent plot will explain the reason for the horror, otherwise it will be really scary, like a thorn on the back. This is my personal opinion. I remember when I was a freshman in high school, I didn't dare to turn off the lights to watch the Tomb of the Gods. It was really scary (maybe I'm timid or I'm a bit more experienced). After reading about sixty chapters, I really have to praise Peacock. The writing is really good. The character design of the protagonist has been really researched and is in line with the taste of male videos. The system settings are also okay. Some settings are vague and not very good. It is better to make them clear. The settings are complete and logically closed, such as quantifying merit. In fact, peacocks can also explain quite a lot of things clearly. I remember that the description of the spiritual stone before was very impressive, but it still felt vague. Although the first few chapters are relatively dull, they become fascinating later on. The only drawback is that the protagonist's ex-girlfriend is too low, and the plot is also very low, but there is nothing wrong with the logic and it does not violate the protagonist's personality. I hope Peacock can update more. I don't know how I can help with the new book. I will vote for you with my monthly recommendation votes. If you keep this quality, I will definitely order them all.

The author is great, is there any connection between the new book and the previous one?

1. Nuonuo may be the heir of Mr. Bao (so Mr. Bao is gone?), And Li is the informant + financial source of the organization 2. Black and White may be influenced by the evil fairy and use women as stand-ins (rich women, three daughters) to prevent disasters (or seek luck). Lin was originally in Within the scope of Black and White's considerations, not letting the male protagonist pay back the money may be to seek wealth. Hearing the male protagonist mention "dead bugs" (perhaps specifically referring to people like Black and White), Black and White was wary and deliberately deleted Lin, causing a stir 3. The method of seeking luck may be related to Mrs. Duhai

It looks pretty good. Lu Yu's life turned from rich to poor, and his family situation became difficult. Fortunately, there is no end to the road, and he still has his brothers to accompany him. He got involved in strange things and experienced the fairy family, clay figures, etc. Only by retrieving the past can he realize the bitter consequences. He grew up in the suffering and got closer to the truth step by step.

At present, there is no aura of immortality, only the whispers of clay dolls and old folk stories. "Cultivating immortals" is written as a folk taboo, which is full of coldness and a little panic.

A young man whose family is in decline meets the "Mrs. Crossing the Sea" who was ordered to cultivate immortality four hundred years ago. However, the immortal cultivator has become strange, which also leads to the consequences of the old immortal not staying behind and seeking immortality. Whether the so-called immortality is true or false, and whether immortality is an immortality or a disaster, this book still feels a bit creepy.

A supernatural novel that is getting better and better. There is currently no emotional line, just a plot. You can read it.

I feel that the protagonist of the supernatural novel is very courageous. He is not afraid when seeing the clay man talking, so he can get the opportunity to cultivate as an immortal. But the title of the novel is Immortal Disaster. Will cultivating immortality bring any disasters in the future? I'm really curious.

Support the author, come on! Stable updates every day

It's been a long time since I've seen a peacock. I remember the last time I saw it was at the Tomb of the God of Misfortune. It's been so many years, but I suddenly saw it today…

I feel like the author used it a bit strangely

Opened a new book? Welcome back the Dragon King! ! !

Is this related to the first and second parts?

Well written. Listened to it

Don't call me if you don't have 4 million words

I said that this novel gave me the excitement I felt when I watched the movie "Twin Eyes". Do you understand? Why do I say this? Because the moment when Lu Yu discovered that there is a gym hidden underground, to a certain extent, it is a replica of the building in the building in "Two Eyes" (because it highlights a shock, because ordinary things have an unknown side), so the more I read this book, the more I like it. I hope the author can add some plots similar to "Two Eyes" (not to change the outline, but in the extras or Branch plots or something like that, adding a certain character who has been waiting for the opportunity of autopsy in order to become an immortal, but the autopsy failed and became an immortal disaster), the next door "My Notes on Becoming a God in the World" (also the starting point of the weird novel) added the plot of "Zombies Reborn in Seven Days" (almost a perfect replica, by the way, some of the villains in the novel have the real names of actors in real life, hh)

Will the traffic of this book increase if it is released in the city or Xianxia 🤔

I hope to continue to update more, and I will definitely subscribe when the time comes. I don't know why there is so little traffic.

Today I actually achieved the six-to-two updates I mentioned when I opened the book, awesome review

I don't understand that I have to arrange for a woman. 😅😅Garbage

Everything else is fine, but the female protagonist is not very likable. Of course, this may vary from person to person.

Stop looking for someone to swipe it. Old things are sewn into modern leather, but the main thread is still a beast's whitewash. If you give merit to animals, there will be no good people.

It's the Peacock🦚Princess. When a masterpiece comes out, it's like drinking a glass of fine wine. It's fragrant and fragrant. What you read are words. In fact, what appears in your mind are characters, words, and pictures in your mind... It's so shocking.

It took me too long to realize that there is a character who trains demons in it

I don't know what the character of the protagonist in the third part is like.

How to comment? I'm a newbie and I don't know, but it looks really good. Please update more.

You are already a VIP, why did you put so few chapters out? Put more, one chapter is only 6 points, others are 20 points for one chapter 😆

Write quickly, and I will support you with monthly votes from now on

~~Can this symbol be used less?