Five Dynasties: from Pawn to Emperor

Have you ever been a tooth soldier? Let's write about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms

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There was Shao Shude before him, and Xia Youde behind him.

In the future, we should first take Jiangxi and Hunan, then send troops to conquer Jinling, the capital of Wu, and then attack Wu and Yue with a great victory, and the foundation of the king's hegemony will be established.

From Chapter 44 to Chapter 50, the protagonist is gone and the book is finished.

Overall well written. There are just some flaws and shortcomings that need to be strengthened. ① It can be written about military aspects, which is the strength of this book. So far, Xia Youde's descriptions of charging into battle and small scenes of battles are pretty good. The larger-scale battles and strategic descriptions have not yet been described, and I hope to continue to maintain and optimize the advantages. ②The emotional aspect of the characters, especially the description of male and female emotions, is a major shortcoming and needs to be strengthened. ③The official positions, backgrounds and personalities of the characters are still inconsistent with historical facts in some places, and there are considerable discrepancies. For example, Wang Yanzhang's official position, relationship with Yang Shihou, Yang Shihou's character, and Li Cunxu's character are somewhat dark. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better, come on! ! !

An ordinary small-town writer travels through troubled times and sees rioters killing people. He wonders how to escape and survive. He stands next to the corpses on the ground and resolves to say that he must live a different life in this life. How can he be a normal person?

A good book is like a fine wine. The more you taste it, the better it becomes. I hope the author will write better and better 😍😍😍

It's okay, but I'm afraid the author will run away if my grades are not good.

Xia Youde (template from Taiping Year)

Li Cunxu is also the male protagonist? Is the role setting wrong?

The protagonist's overlord spirit is invincible. In the fifth generation, he let the warriors work in the fields and work hard in the field. Then he farmed and paid himself wages. Wow, why don't other feudal towns learn from such a good method? They also use most of the fiscal revenue to support the army. These military leaders are really stupid. They don't know how to operate like the protagonist. It seems that the protagonist can unify the world just around the corner.

Don't give birth to your legitimate son so early. The main reason is that the age of the protagonist is too young, otherwise it won't be the same no matter how you write it. If Yang Yi is not the queen in the future, let's talk about it differently, but you can't let him join the army, otherwise it will be too nonsense. Of course I don't think the author would make such a stupid mistake

Finish your studies first, don't be in a hurry, and wish the author a speedy return (Reposting updates is not allowed to explode?)

There are very few books about the Five Dynasties, but this one is very good and a masterpiece.

We are all emperors, should we unify the world? If we unify the world, what other five generations will there be? The names are not very correct. The names of Fusheng in the late Tang Dynasty should at least be more rigorous! 🤭🤭🤭

The protagonist met Zhu Wen in person to ask for the reward, which was the biggest failure. You go to unsafe places as a leader. Which festival did you see that made you go there? You are making a joke of all your lives. A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. Don't you understand this? Why is it that one moment he is decisive in killing, and the other moment he is so stupid that he dies? I am Zhu Wen and I know you have just seized power. I don't have to kill you. Can you please keep me here? Give you a riser tube. Let your civil servant brother come to power. After shooting a few subordinates, he has the right to withdraw his troops. Don't underestimate the integrity of the warriors of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.

The biggest failure is to write emotional scenes. The body of seventeen or eighteen years old is officially young and strong. When I am very angry, I have my own career. I have to find a few beauties to celebrate that day. First, in order to put out the fire, and second, in order to have a baby, I can't stop for a moment, immediately, immediately, must, keep giving birth to the baby. , This is the top priority, there are successors, everyone follows you to have hope, get married, but in order to write a love drama, you have not found a woman for several years, and you have not had children. It is not that you cannot afford a wife and you are poor, and you are not a modern person. You are proud of not getting married, you lie drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman, and you wake up to hold the power of the world. This is the purpose of struggle.

After reading more than seventy chapters, the author's writing style is good but the protagonist is given too many hooks. Let me talk about the unreasonable points. 1. The time of rebirth is not right. It would have been too late for Gao Jixing to conquer Jingnan. Otherwise, with his ability, the Gao family would definitely be more than just three states. It would be best to be reborn during the period of Min Xu and Zhou Yue. 2. The promotion was too rapid. As an adopted grandson, Gao Jixing worked hard for more than ten years to get a Jingnan Jiedushi. You succeeded in two years, even if you were on a rocket. 3. Forcibly demoting historical figures, including Gao Jixing, Ma Yin, and others, is too bizarre. 4 The map is wrong. You don't have to pass through Chenzhou to go from Jingnan to Tanzhou. The detour around Yuanling and Huaihua from Jingzhou to Changsha is a bit opposite. Instead of attacking Chenzhou, it is closer to attacking Yuezhou.

The protagonist started his life in the south, shouldn't he fight from the north to the south?