1987: Smoke from Mountains and Seas

There are so many little surprises today, and I also wish all of you parents of food and clothing, may life be wonderful everywhere.

Some words are often repeated before and after, and the tone is a bit harsh.

Isn't it cool?

The heroine generated using beanbags feels good

The comments after each chapter are gone. I can't even see the ones I posted myself. I'm convinced.

To be honest, it would be more interesting to write less about emotional scenes and more about the business and relationships in the store. I skipped the emotional scenes.

I bought it for more than a month and thought it would not open

I just read two chapters. My aunt married from Jiaozhou to Laoshan in 1994. When I was a kid, I went to Mount Laoshan. The road took eighteen turns and I fainted, but not many tourists. There is even less possibility of a farmhouse restaurant. The car can't get in. Talking about tourism in the 1980s and 1990s was sheer nonsense. Laoshan was so poor at that time that even shopping in the mountains was so tiring.

But it's just that your relationship writing is too long and too early. Emotional scenes can be written interspersed with meals and daily life.

The taste of love is too strong and there is no emotion. Unnatural

Reading, I'm in Laoshan, which restaurant should I come to eat at?

This is tea at Mingxia Cave in September last year. I drink tea at Mingxia Cave every year. I stay there for several hours and it is really comfortable. The next few pictures show the weather in Qingdao today, which is very good. I want to go, but I'm very lazy lately. Although I'm coding but I can squeeze out time, I'm just lazy. I'm very lazy recently.

The heart of the cloud has no ties, and the character is free. The coolness of clouds lies in the fact that they never explain their shape, nor do they miss any part of the sky. Open-minded people are like clouds; Gather and disperse according to circumstances, come and go according to the wind.

When writing this kind of daily writing, the author must first learn to delete. When the author of this kind of writing writes a piece of content that he is familiar with, he has a lot of ideas in his mind. He wants to write it all out, with many details and full content, but when written out in full, it seems long-winded and procrastinating. The author writes Sometimes I don't think that I can write smoothly, and I may even think that this is a very good paragraph that I have written. However, readers will not like it. They feel that it has nothing to say, and a lot of ink is wasted on just a small thing. It is suspected of filling the number of words. If there are a few extra chapters, some readers will stop reading. The best way is that after the author has finished writing, don't rush to upload it, wait a few hours to let his mind calm down, and then the author reads the manuscript himself, preferably reading it aloud. In this way, when his mind is calm and he has to work hard to read it aloud, the author can feel whether ordinary readers are tired of reading this new writing, and whether they find it too verbose.

The dialogue was bland, and it felt like I was reading a diary, a running account

Is this in a diary? It's too bland and has no sense of immersion.

This book has come back to life in the past few days at the end of the month. It's not easy, so work hard (this chapter is gone again, so I can only post it)

The writing is good at the beginning, but why does it become more and more obscene as it goes on?

How can you be popular if you update one picture every day?

Come on, write more