Douluo: My Name Is Yang Jian, and My Body Has Become a Saint.

The first part is okay, I can still read it, but what is written at the end? Has he lost his humanity, been influenced by divinity or something? It takes such a long time to write, how can I make up the word count? The pace is so fast, it can be finished. The events moved forward so fast, but then suddenly it slowed down. Even when it slowed down, it was still too fast to hit the word count. It was too high, and the result was like this.

From now on, don't write "brother", write "brother" instead. Don't write "uncle", write "uncle". Don't say "Xiao Tian Dog" when calling "Xiao Tian Dog", just call it "Xiao Tian Dog". It feels really weird if you write an extra word. It seems that he is not familiar with his brother, he and Yue Guan are all acting, and he and Roaring Sky Dog are just acquaintances.

The protagonist has been written down by the author, and the current setting is also baffling. Yang Er is a god and wants to be a human, but the author has written the protagonist to not want to be a human before he becomes a god.

I was attracted by the comic. It was quite interesting at first, but later on I don't know why the protagonist acted like a pervert and wanted to kill the girl who had been with him for a long time. The girl had done nothing wrong at all. His personality was also very fragmented. He would destroy people's sects at every turn, and then he suddenly became kind-hearted and eliminated the Demon Guard, but he pretended not to hear when others scolded him in front of him??? I seriously doubt that the author had dreamed of becoming psychotic. What's more, the real Yang Jian, who became a saint in the flesh and stood upright, cared about the people even if he was ranked among the immortals in the end, and guarded the Duanjiangkou, he was a just man. Even if you don't have such a righteous heart, you won't kill people at every turn? And what's the point of bullying a few little girls? It's so disgusting, this book!! It's really a waste of money to eat S

I feel that there is no need to kill the Qibao Glazed Sect. I have been with Ning Rongrong for so long. It is really unnecessary. If I really kill them all, I will not watch it. It is boring. The combat power is not controlled well and it is invincible after only 100 chapters. But it is acceptable as a cool article, but at least there must be some humanity.

A level 96 Sword Douluo can't do anything with his main spirit, and a level 95 Haotian Douluo is vulnerable. Isn't this a big difference?

What the hell, it was okay at the beginning, but I dreamed about it later, how much the combat power has collapsed, the four rings can be used by two titled Douluo to fight, is the protagonist still a human being, and the original protagonist group was captured and killed one by one for no reason?

Just write whatever you have in your outrageous dreams, and then Wushuang will cut the grass and get it done.

Leave a comment. Just reading the introduction, I have no motivation to click in. Dad is a harpoon, and mom is a local dog. By your time, they have become a three-pointed two-edged sword and a roaring dog. You can't mutate so much after eating the Silver Dragon King! If the protagonist is the reincarnation of Yang Jian, and you worship Bibi Dong as your teacher, aren't you afraid of Master Yuding striking you with a sword from across the air? The most important thing in Chan religion is the teacher-teacher relationship. Becoming a teacher without authorization is an act of apostasy! It must be said that the martial spirit settings of the three-pointed two-edged sword and the roaring dog seriously do not conform to the Douluo setting! The setting of apprenticeship with Bibi Dong seriously deviates from Yang Jian's character setting! With these two points, there is absolutely no motivation to open it! If the protagonist is the twin martial souls of a harpoon and a dog, and then through the protagonist's later operations and training, he gradually evolves in the direction of a three-pointed two-edged sword and a roaring dog, and most successfully evolves into a three-pointed, two-edged sword and a roaring dog, there will be something to watch!

... It's too ridiculous to penetrate Chen Xin at level 50, not to mention Roaring Sky Dog knocking Gu Rong away without even adding a soul ring.

It's the beginning of the first cycle of ten thousand years again. I can't read a bit of this book.

After it was put on the shelves, the quality was very poor, and the pretentious part was very vulgar. And level 50 Dachenxin Tang Hao? I ordered a hundred chapters, and to be honest, it's not worth it!

Nothing to watch, unrivaled fighting power, almost no humanity, no desire, naturally nothing to watch.

Damn it, for the sake of having a bad guy, he forcibly changed his character. Classmate Yan is not guilty of this, and Chen Xin Gu Rong has no eyes to see it. Is this something written by a human? Tang San, please stop typing on the keyboard. What good will it do to you by contaminating everyone's eyes like this?

The protagonist's living environment doesn't make him so inhumane, right?

Why do you still charge money for the novel you are publishing?

It's all a crushing game, it's really cool. When I'm at level 50 and I'm at level 95, the Howling Sky Dog's combat effectiveness is always better than that of humans.

Not rigorous enough. First of all, Wuhun Palace is not without enemies. It can be said that except for Wuhun Palace itself, all forces are enemies. You exposed your twin martial souls in public in public, and the awakened people came for three days, which is enough for other forces to kill you a thousand and eight hundred times. Secondly, you went to Wuhun Palace and left your family in a small fishing village? Afraid they won't die quickly enough?

Others are trying to kill you, but you just won't kill them. Where are you going to play?

If the traffic is good, the author will vote for Pod🫛

Is the author too depressed in reality and can he release it in novels?

Don't write novels if you have no brains, I only have one sentence

It's so tight that I can't see a little bit, and the more I see the garbage behind it,

Many of the details of the original characters are not quite right, and the parts about Shura, God and Poseidon that follow are not very good either.

I won't talk about the first ring of ten thousand years, you can see for yourself🤔🤔

Why don't you slaughter the Qibao Glazed Sect? I want to see the blood flow like a river

It's boring. I was diverted, and the combat power collapsed so much. Let's not talk about it. Let the protagonist kill decisively, not let you kill without logic, right?

The world of Douluo cannot bear the cause and effect of Zhenjun Erlang