Peninsula: It Turns Out That I Am the Capital!

The writing is a bit messy, and I was involved in a conspiracy at the beginning. In order to short Bitcoin, I contacted this expert and that lawyer for risk control. As a result, the principal was more than 3 million won, worth 20,000 yuan. Even if it doubles in a few months, it may not be as much as you earn from part-time work.

The writing is so messy, the present tense and the future tense are mixed together, and the plot is completely blurry.

Mainly with the fifth generation, supplemented by the fourth generation, some are female supporting characters/py The heroines with more roles Eunha Jung Eun-bi Jang Won-young Ryu Ji-min Ahn Yoo-jin Kim Min-hyang Gisele Ning Ye-joo Shin Yoo-na Hwang Ye-ji Seol-yoon Kwon Eun-bi Kim Min-joo Kang Hye-won Cho Mi-yeon somi Sana Mina Momo Tzuyu Kim Soo-jung Bae Joo Hyun Kang Seul Gi Kim Ji Won

What are you writing about? It's so confusing. The relationships between the characters are messy and the plot is messy. It's very abrupt. Does anyone understand?

The heroine was well chosen, but the writing was incomprehensible. I felt that the characters were all pretending to be pretentious when speaking and doing things, and there was no sense of being alive.

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The free chapter is a mess After it was put on the shelves, I obviously feel that the writing style is improving.

After reading Chapter 40, I have a few questions that I would like to ask the author The chapter timeline is confusing, and the initial capital accumulation in the early stage is not smooth, but since it is a Korean entertainment, everyone is not here to watch this, so forget it. There is a large overlap between chapters, about 20 chapters? Several chapters in a row are the end of the previous chapter. Should we change the narrative order or not change it at all? The content is inconsistent. The most overwhelming thing is this. In fact, it was also there before, but until chapter 40, there is really a lot of doubt. The reporter recommended by Zheng, the trainee went to SBS to meet the reporter, and the contract was provided in person. In the next chapter, it became mailed. What if Zheng was behind the instigation to exonerate himself, but when he recalled it later, the trainee told her in person that he mailed it from a convenience store? This can no longer be explained by clearing away suspicion. The description logic is difficult to explain. In addition, the logic problems in the content of these articles are not caused by the memory loss caused by hallucinations and the direct publication of the articles without reviewing them? To put it simply, I have no evidence, but I think it is AI

It's really not as good as your previous book 😅

Why is the plot so confusing•ᴗ•💧

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The people watching were dizzy and couldn't even understand the most basic order of time. It's too confusing. The causes and consequences of the protagonist being framed are not clearly written. The inheritance war that the opponent who framed the hero is involved in is not clearly written. The plot of why a rival heir brother suddenly sells the bitcoins managed by his younger brother in Chapter 19 is also inexplicable. It is not clearly written why the opponent who framed the hero suddenly collapsed. There is no chronological order, and the logic of the characters is so confusing that it seriously affects the reading experience.

I read the first chapter, it's a bit like AI. Then I read the second chapter. Well, it's AI.

It feels like translating Korean web texts

There are too many descriptions of appearance and environment. I write each action over and over again, which makes me have a headache.

It's so funny that there are no people with two-character names in the peninsula. They respect Confucianism... It's so funny that I just read the first page of the first chapter... 88