The Goal Is to Bring a Smile to the Faces of Dungeon Challengers!

Stiffly moved, barrage, audience, anchor, all zombies.

The map guidance was already poor, and I couldn't find a map master. The tutorial part just after I got the white wave was also deleted. The Mantis Lord, whose moves were regular and had obvious gaps, was changed to a Crazy Dog and Crazy Chain Players who can't beat the Mantis Lord will feel that they are inferior. Is it possible that the Mantis Lord's moves are easy to dodge but not easy to be greedy, so players think it's their fault?

Awarding... Magic Network... Collecting taxes... It took a long time to make a game that was purely reskinned.

Daphne, pure Daphne. This writing method is no less than writing a Japanese-style campus romance using the Chinese high school senior year as the background, and it is still a pure re-skin.

As long as someone comes to challenge the dungeon, I can gain strength improvement. As a result, there are a lot of digging and survival games. Will anyone really come to play this?

The first chapter said that this world lacks entertainment The result is no more than 20 chapters. Chapter 12 writes that this world view is particularly grand, with the concept of planets, the concept of the universe, and the concept of planes, which can be called the universe No, are you worthy of it? Take a step back, even if the world you mentioned before only refers to the planet where the protagonist is located Your world view is so grand, what do you want? The readers are here to see the reaction caused by your protagonist's game I don't see how your worldview can be used It feels like the IQ of everyone in the world has dropped 10,000 times, but the map has expanded 10,000 times and the population has increased 10,000 times, so the total IQ may not have changed Isn't this necessary?

There are too many bugs and the values ​​are too inflated.

Have you ever been a duelist? You take it for granted and write random things, and you don't know whether the effects can be written out. Why not write some ancient cards?

For the purpose of posting a joke in the title of the book, author, you made the protagonist treat the anchor like a crazy person

A layer of dungeon skin for making games + live broadcasting

I don't know if it's my imagination, but the character of the protagonist seems to have changed in the previous chapters and later chapters. Later, he completely turned into an unknown guy. The content of this book also feels a bit unclear. I don't know whether I want to write a game or these characters.

I also write too slowly. I've only been able to write like this in Braille since March.

Not bad, the world view is also original and quite interesting. It feels like there is room for expansion. But the progress feels too fast. The protagonist advances and changes pictures as fast as playing a game. Also, these dungeons are almost always described using multi-character behind-the-scenes flow. The picture change speed is so fast and it feels like it is easy to get out of control. Furthermore, the portrayal of the protagonist feels very godlike. He wanted to become a god as soon as he traveled through time. It was a bit overwhelming.