Gou Zai Surrendered to the World of Qi Dao and Became the Righteous Path

You are reborn again, you are an old man again, you are wearing a book again. Can you bear it?

It's so strange, why the protagonist keeps hiding his cultivation and combat power there. The sect you belong to is not the kind to suppress geniuses, so what is there to hide?

Can another one be put on the shelves to change the world line?

The sect aspect is well written, but you, the time traveler, the old man, the person who travels through books, the person who is reborn, the one who seizes his body and travels through books, can you really grasp this?

As the title says, the pace is too slow, especially when the protagonist is hiding in the sect and calculating his contribution. Resources are important, but there is no need to write about the protagonist calculating resources all the time, right? Speed ​​it up appropriately, and keep it simple for the more repetitive and boring things like having a meal in seclusion and talking about other people with cheats... 😒 Moreover, such a bland and slow pace really conflicts with your introduction and a bunch of cheating characters in the plot. It doesn't have the writing skills to write well, and it really doesn't look good.

The author writes about the daily life of the Zhengdao Sect and is still online, but the problems of the previous book are still vaguely there. It was too thoughtful and I don't know if it can be controlled. First, the protagonist is a time-traveler, then he is going to the end of the Dharma era, and then he is the little brother of Grandpa Ring. He still practices Qi that is different from the mainstream. Then there is the Small Immortal World (a small world where immortal cultivators get angry in the Dharma Age, which is very common) Then there are some book piercers in the sect (who have been taken away) and reborn people, and they pick up an immortal king to play big chess. The stall is a bit too big. To be honest, given the situation of the last book on the shelves, people have doubts about the author.

The protagonist pretends to be awesome, but unfortunately he pretends to be stupid✗

Will the author stop messing around with his life? What did I think, it was so bad? . . I only made an initial reservation and regretted it to death.

It's a bit old-fashioned now, it's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to throw it away.

I feel like you are very good at defeating your own luck. The last book had such a good opportunity.

Isn't the plot very interesting? Do you want to survive until the finale? The other plots are all unexpected revelations that shock the people around you.

The author is awesome, you are almost crazy, you are still in the mood to change the title of the book, are you still thinking about Feng Shui?

The bonuses are still accumulating. Another passerby has come out to defeat monsters and upgrade the template. Author, have you really reflected on the shortcomings of the previous book?

It's okay, but reading the comments section, I heard that the author committed suicide in this book, I hope this one won't

It's different from what I imagined. From the beginning, there are still more than fifty years to the Jueling Age. The Jueling Age lasts for three hundred years. If you have a chance at the end of the fetal breath or in the fairy world, you can use your lifespan to survive to the next era. The innate magical powers introduced are all the magical powers used by the big guys. I can probably write hundreds of chapters before the spiritual energy is cut off.

I feel like a eunuch 😅

Man, it's almost 50 chapters, and I feel like there's not even a climax. The fighting scene and the sense of visuals were not even presented, and it was already over.

Haha, the cutting was faster this time. What other novels are you writing? Hurry up and find a factory to work in so that you don't harm your book friends 😤

I can understand the author's thoughts when describing the sword sect The details are not polished well It's not that this detail ruins the image of the sword sect, but the writing is not so textured and the writing is cheap For example, the senior officials of the sect all speak in that special vernacular and dare to make particularly big judgments. There is no such thing as that The image of a master It does not mean that a master must be mysterious, but the kind of person who wants to describe that kind of status, the kind of language that pays attention to the details For example, the sect leader just met the protagonist and knew that the protagonist had concealed it, so he directly said that he had concealed it well, and then pointed out his problems It was nonsense for half a page, talking about this and that. This is not how approachable things are written This nonsense is not for the protagonist, but for the readers, to tell the readers that I am so righteous, and this is the White Lotus. Isn't it enough to just show the action directly? Why bother to instill it in the readers' minds so directly?

Haha, I knew it, it was written in a mess, if you don't break it, who will?

Nowadays, the books in Qidian are very violent, and the sects written about them can play a contrasting role. In addition, let's increase the protagonist's cultivation speed. Try not to overwhelm him, otherwise how can he overwhelm the heroes in the book "Rebirth" and so on?

It turns out to be this author. The first book was good. "Self-Death". This one..., Come on.

? ? ? Are you sure you have the ability to write it well? It's too many and too complex to be complete.

Overall, it's better. The protagonist's outlook on life is also relatively positive, but the pace is a little slow. Also, the current world view seems relatively big. I don't know if I can grasp it well.

It's okay, it just feels a bit weird and hard to describe, but overall it's still good and can be used as food.

The title of this book is so strange, it seems very convoluted.

I saw it too quickly, this is Lin Chao's grandpa practicing the Qi Building Foundation Pill, right?