Douluo Jueshi: I Can Overdraw the Future in Advance

The author wrote about the attached soul bone, and what he wrote was lj. I couldn't even understand what he wrote. The protagonist's soul power leveling up speed is ridiculous. In the original work, Wang Sheng in Dou Yi reached level seven in five years, and Huo Yuhao in Dou II leveled in more than five years. As a result, the protagonist in the author's book only improved one level of soul power in one year. Things clearly written in the original work, he wrote according to his own feeling without checking the information For example: If the author said that there are still two years before Huo Yuhao enters the school after the protagonist enters school, then Zhou Yi should now teach the second grade. After Huo Yuhao comes, she only comes to the first grade because she was sued by the students and cannot teach the fourth grade. As a result, the protagonist Zhou Yi comes to the first grade this time, what is she writing about. Also, the original book clearly states that Beibei repeated a grade in fourth grade, so Beibei should be in third grade now, but the author writes that Beibei is in second grade. Beibei and Tang Ya should be the same age, but the author thought that Tang Ya was younger than Beibei because Moon said in the original book that Beibei played house with Tang Ya. When an author writes a fanfic, you have to check the original work, and then you write according to your feelings. Then why don't you be original? If you are not capable, you have to be serious about writing a fanfic.

It's too bland, unattractive, and has the feel of a running account. There are no little ingenuities or little ideas. In short, not interesting enough.

It is simply impossible to produce a ten thousand year soul bone in the freshman competition.

Why are there skills that are not as good as the FW soul skills of the FW protagonist wrapped in blue and silver? 🤮👎

The first soul skill, Ice Mist, slows down the enemy by 20% and is gone. The second soul skill, Ice Thorn, is triggered by touching the ground. The range is three meters in a circle and seven meters in a straight line. The ice has no special effects and the thorn has no special effects. It is just a ground thorn. I haven't watched it and I don't want to watch it. Let alone compare it with Blue Silver Winding. Go and sit at the same table as Lone Bamboo Pole Vault.

It's so overwhelming. The cultivation speed of the third-level innate is not as fast as that of Huo Yuhao, who is hungry and cold every day at the first-level 🙂

This soul skill is really useless. If you don't know how to write ice mist, ice spike, and ice knife, don't write it. It requires a mechanism but no limit, and it requires a value but no value.

Isn't Lin Yu, Shrek's first-grade teacher, Zhou Yi with a different name? Don't change anything you did, just copy and paste the original text? Why don't you write your roommate as a woman disguised as a man? What kind of lj stuff is this?

It's outrageous that the ice bird martial soul can evolve even though the soul rings it has absorbed are nondescript. It's really intoxicating.

The protagonist (the author) really hasn't figured this out yet. 1. The cooling time is unknown. At first I thought the cooldown time was calculated together. If I chose one for one year, I could choose again after three months. Later I discovered that during the three-month cooling period, five years could still be chosen? ! That is to say, the cooling time of the two options is calculated separately? But after five years of selection, there was a one-year cool-down period, and the one-year option could no longer be selected, and the protagonist was still struggling repeatedly. So does this hook have a long cooldown covering a short cooldown? 2. The utilization efficiency is not high. At first I thought I could only inherit the results, but later I found out that I could also inherit some memories, maybe because of a patch. When I first used it for five years, I still had the memory of using the second soul skill. I thought that it would be buggy and "pseudo-create" soul skills, so that I could plan more valuable soul skills, such as amplification mechanisms. It turned out not to be. Including the age of the soul ring, I mentioned earlier that I used soul power to fortify my body and strive for the second millennium ring, and I took action and obtained the results by using the ghost ring. However, when I was preparing to hunt for the soul ring, I only used the ghost ring to obtain the memory. The author doesn't know if there is an outline. Even if there is no outline, you must at least plan the soul skills in advance, right? Including soul rings and soul bones, how to become a god in the future, the protagonist does not plan, the author has to plan!

1. It's not interesting to join Shrek, 2. In an era when Douluo gods are frequently written, there is no unique skill

When I saw the introduction saying about creating your own power, I personally felt that creating your own power is a thankless act when you have no way to believe in becoming a god. The sects in Douluo Continent are all aristocratic families called sects. Shrek, on the other hand, looks like a sect.

Obviously the previous writing is good, but I don't understand the use of golden fingers, and the selection of soul rings is also very loose and ordinary. The protagonist's martial soul is very weak. In fact, it is easy to improve the bloodline of the absorbed soul rings. But the overall poisonous point is not that big, and it is easy to accept. Teacher Lin is hard to accept. If you enter Shrek, you are finished. The plot has not been changed at all. As soon as Lin Xing's class teacher came out, I already guessed the plot of the next chapter. What else should I watch? This class teacher, Lin Xing, also ran 100 laps and expelled students. Even his lines were exactly the same. But Mrs. Zhou dared to do this because Fan Yu was in the background, and other teachers dared to try this. It's really disgusting.

The light-attributed phoenix is ​​a useless snack that cannot purify evil spirits. Behind it is Ye Xishui, a big bomb. Apart from Xuanzi, he is the last person to choose.

Open high, low, go away, and auto-activate poorly. The data is written in a mess like the original. How can you beat Tang San if you don't auto-activate? The original text is Tang San's auto-activation and deus ex machina. You're afraid of hair. If I didn't say anything about the abuse in the main text, just fork it.

In total, it took almost twenty-six years to cultivate to level twenty-three.

After reading, here are some suggestions first. If the martial soul evolves, you must either improve the bloodline foundation of your own martial soul, or improve the elemental foundation. Your first three soul rings can be said to be very complicated. The level of ice attributes is not high, and the increase and purification of your own bloodline is zero. These three Recycling has basically no effect. If your martial soul is essentially an ice bamboo shoot, you should absorb a powerful ice-type avian soul beast, or one with a higher level of ice attribute. Then there is a 40,000-year-old soul bone from the New Life Conference, which is highly poisonous. Then, the writing is okay, and it can be seen as slightly poisonous.

Dou Er is so bad. Not to mention the evil soul master wreaking havoc. The nobles inherited from Dou Yi have formed a powerful family. Use fiefdoms to enslave places. Equal to the local emperors everywhere. As long as it's not cut off. After thousands of years of optimization, the martial spirit passed down from his family is basically a high-level martial spirit. There is also strength to rely on. Plus the wars of several major empires. The victims are ordinary people and low-level soul masters. If the strength is not strong enough, a random evil spirit master will appear unexpectedly. Or an imperial conscription. The family will be destroyed. You just get stronger. No choice

Plug-ins are simulators. One simulates for 1 year and cools down for 3 months. The other is idle for 5 years and cools down for 1 year. Your mediocre protagonist can really break through the talent barrier. The Douluo talent barrier is almost impossible to break through in time. Shouldn't this plug-in be used to write something different? It only talks about cultivation and using resources to evolve martial souls, without any special features. I basically have no intention of reading any more. After turning a few pages of each picture, you will know what to do next. It is too ordinary.

LJ novel, no wonder it is a LJ novel, without the Ice Emperor, why should I convince the Snow Emperor? It's quite funny

Compared with overdraft, it can be said to be a deduction and a manifestation.

The three best soul beasts for the protagonist's martial spirit are Tianmeng and Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor. Tianmeng is even worse. After all, he is the main spirit, and the ice attribute is incidental. If the other two can absorb soul rings, the soul bones will be too great for the protagonist. Should the author consider how to steal them?

Everyone is saying that the soul skills I wrote are weak. Do you have any suggestions for me? In fact, the soul skills I wrote are not weak, I feel The first soul skill is a percentage debuff, and it is not just a slowdown, it is a slowdown in all latitudes, the soul power runs, and the skill release is slowed down. I think this is abnormal My inspiration for the second soul skill is actually the Cold Shadow Art of the Dragon King of the Universe Star God, followed by the ice blast The third soul skill is the ice attribute of Ten Thousand Swords Returning to the Sect, I feel okay These three soul skills are not as weak as the Blue Silver Pole Vault level, right? 🥲 If I want to write something strong, I can also write it, such as freezing water, freezing the human body, freezing time and space, but writing this way will break down too easily. Shouldn't the ice attribute in the early stage be ice blades, ice-made weapons, and ice shields?

Saw Chapter 72, the imbecile protagonist

It's okay. It's okay if it's a bit dull. What I'm writing so far is quite delicate. I hope I can write it faster.

Author, according to your writing method, Ma Xiaotao must be harvested. After treatment, it will be the ultimate fire. The treatment process is to cultivate feelings. Just take your time.

Don't take care of yourself too much, otherwise you'll look like a nanny, and you'll have to become the main character's thug later on.

Inexplicably, the hang is getting bigger and bigger. The front is quite nice.